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121 Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s,  but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and perticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and perticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

 

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, perticularly red wine, they began growing again.

 

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and perticularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again.

 

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in perticular red wine, they began growing again. (A)

 

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in perticular red wine, started them growing again.

 

请教NN,A中 and perticularly of red wine 的 and 做什么成分,我认为这个and画蛇添足,错误的将red wine和alcohol并列,alcohol本身就包括了red wine, 应该将这个and去掉,perticulary of red wine直接修饰前面的consumption of alcohol. 如果用and,那么前面就不应该加逗号。

 

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