OG12-121

maseryou

121 Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s,  but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and perticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

 

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and perticularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

 

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, perticularly red wine, they began growing again.

 

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and perticularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again.

 

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in perticular red wine, they began growing again. (A)

 

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in perticular red wine, started them growing again.

 

请教NN，A中 and perticularly of red wine 的 and 做什么成分，我认为这个and画蛇添足，错误的将red wine和alcohol并列，alcohol本身就包括了red wine, 应该将这个and去掉，perticulary of red wine直接修饰前面的consumption of alcohol. 如果用and，那么前面就不应该加逗号。

OPEN TO DISCUSSION.

smartcoco

个人的一点看法：

B选项 a moderate alcohol consumption, perticularly red wine,不对，后面应该是perticularly red wine consumption

C选项which就近指代red wine，被动比较awkward。

D选项与B选项错误类似

E选项总的感觉不对，同时患有和BD类似的错误。

A选项and perticularly of red wine是做插入成分，补全了应该是and perticularly consumption of red wine。相对而言就A好一些，但是这个and个人也觉得比较多余~~

请NN解释~

maseryou

其他选项确实都有错，A相对来说最好一点，可是对于这个and还是有疑问.

fuhongler

没什么语法理由哈 可能是想强调特殊说明吧 

they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly linked moderate consumption of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

把前面共同部分省略就成了A的样子