[转]7月-8月GMAT作文机经豪华版+新黄金80篇

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剔出重复结至62篇(各31）

基于大家的协助，小女现在正式暂结自己的JJ作文库，共享哈~~

其原因有：1 老子还有几天就考了，该死死了，再强求作文也没用啦（此话premise：霉的真是一个都没考到）

                  2 根据最近这几天的作文来看，很少出现新的题目，有些题的频率已经很高了（assumption:我没漏统）

                  3 个人感觉练习这62篇已经足够了（assumption：真的每个都踏踏实实写了）

                  4 62篇已经极度接近黄金80的涵盖，如果把80看完也不会愁了，当然还有224（premise: u've plenty of time)

                  5 与其盼望自己碰上JJ，倒不如去浏览一下题库，把每个题都熟悉一下（just as i did in the last few days)

谢所有提供JJ的同学，还有辛苦各部分JJ总结的NN哈

偶在你们的基础上努力向小N犊奋进~~~

附注：如果你没有时间，高频的可练习，低频的想好结构就好

 

 

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作文JJ

注：绿色阴影——Jj主人版权           黄色阴影——作文位置

AWA——AI（１２+4+3+4+2+2+4=31）

 

1、5次 ——保护能源，谁的责任[各国与全球]——黄金首篇

版一：AI:保护能源，需各国一齐努力

版二：AI说的是相比于个人，保护能源需要的是international leadership and cooperation  北美范文很前面就有这道题

版三：AI: 在能源资源保护中,国际领导和全球合作是否需要

版四：AI：It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, sacrificies to conserve energy. 需要worldwide leadership and international cooperation来实现conserve energy resources for the future generations.

版五：AI：黄金最前面的几道。单单指望individual nationconserve envergy是不现实的，必须依靠inwenational leadership 和国际组织

题库2：“It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.”“指望单个国家独立地做出必要的牺牲来保存能源是不现实的。如果我们希望为下一代保护世界的能源资源，国际领导力量和全球性的公司是基本的。”

 

2、4次——体育锻炼和活动对学生来说应该和学术一样重要

版一：AI:  physical activity and sports are as important to students as acedemics. 

版二：physical activity and sports are as important to student's education as acedemics.

版三：Issuehysical activity and sports are as important to a student's education as academics.

版四：ISSUE： physical activity and sports are as important as academics.

 

3、4次—— 谁的影响力更大问题——黄金

版一：Issue：新黄金24. “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.”

版二： Issue：Power business leader和government office 与community的影响对比

版三： Issue: A powerful business leader has more oppurtunity to influent course of community or nation than any government official.

版四：A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or nation than ....any government official.

题库24： “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.”“一个有力的企业领导比一个政府官员有更多的机会影响一个社团或国家的方针。”

 

4、4次——员工满意度的影响问题——黄金

版一：AI是 A company’s long-term success is primarily dependent on the job satisfaction and the job security felt by the company’s employees.

版二：作文2：员工的满意度对于公司的长期发展是至关重要的。

版三：AI  27   Job satisfaction and security 

版四：AI： “A company’s long-term success is primarily dependent on the job satisfaction and the job security felt by the company’s employees.”“一家公司的长期成功主要依赖公司员工的工作满意度和工作安全度。”

题库27： “A company’s long-term success is primarily dependent on the job satisfaction and the job security felt by the company’s employees.”“一家公司的长期成功主要依赖公司员工的工作满意度和工作安全度。”

 

5、2次——公众形象影响力问题

版一：AI: Public figures should not express their opinion if they do not know...

版二：AWI: Public icon should avoid expressing opinions that they have not presonally experienced or directly affected.

题库B5： Public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by.    公众人物应避免表达没参与过的个人意见

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6、2次 ——团队与个人权利之崇尚合作——黄金

版一：立论是组织应该集体决策而不应该给个人过大权力那题

版二：作文1：Groups and organizations should have every member to make decisions and share responsibility and duties. 后面还有半句是如果让一个人集中做决策是不好的...(基本意思就是这样）

题库：5 “All groups and organizations should function as teams in which everyone makes decisions and shares responsibilities and duties. Giving one person central authority and responsibility for a project or task is not an effective way to get work done.”

“所有的团体和组织都应该作为一个每个人都参与决定、分享责任和义务的团队来运作。给予一个人关于一个项目和行动的集中的权威和责任不是完成工作的有效方式。”

 

7、2次 —— 环保靠大家还是政府问题——黄金

版一：ai each individual is responsible for preserving the environment ,而不是government.

版二：AI: “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”

题库13：. “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”“保护自然环境的责任完全属于每个个人，而非政府。”

 

8、2次 ——谁来限制儿童沾染不良信息——黄金

版一：ＡＩNations should cooperate to make regulations to limite children's access to adult material on Internet.

版二：AI：Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.

题库：15 “Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.” *“国家间应该合作发展规范以限制儿童接触英特网上的成人内容。”

*The Internet is a worldwide computer network.

 

9、2次 ——创新好不好——未知

版一： AI：Constant innovation and change对一个想要improve的organization是不好的

版二： AI：innovation and changes within organization are as likely damage to organization as improve it 大致是这样

 

10、1次——人们越来越尊重彼此的不同——黄金

版本：Analysis of Issue: Everywhere, it seems, there are clear and positive signs that people are becoming more respectful of one another’s differences.

题库57： “Everywhere, it seems, there are clear and positive signs that people are becoming more respectful of one another’s differences.”

“看来有明显和确实的迹象说明所有地方的人们都变得对彼此的不同越来越尊重。”

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11、1次——企业该等政策出台后再改变产品生产吗？ ——黄金

版本：作文AI 原题 “Scientists are continually redefining the standards for what is beneficial or harmful to the environment. Since these standards keep shifting, companies should resist changing their products and processes in response to each new recommendation until those recommendations become government regulations.”

 

题库：42. “（同上）.”

 “科学家在不断重新制定对环境什么是有利的，什么是有害的的标准。由于这些标准不停变动，面对新建议，公司应该保持他们的产品和流程不变直到新的建议成为国家标准为止。”

 

12、1次——学校要不要教道德

版本：issue: The primary function of schools shuold be to teach academic skills, not to teach ethcial and social values.

 

题库23： “Schools should be responsible only for teaching academic skills and not for teaching ethical and social values.”    学校不需要教授道德和社会价值

 

13、1次——我们依赖电脑太多——？？是技术话题吗？ 黄金

版本：AI：whether we have depended on computer too much.

 

题库：A12. “Because technology has increased the speed of communication, people are less able to communicate, except on the most superficial level.”

 

14、1次 —— 最好的老师是让学生挑战流行观点而不是接受它

版本：The other one is "Best teachers should expect students to challenge popular ideas instead of accepting it".

 

15、1次 ——有效领导通过道德最大化实现利润最大化——黄金

版本：AI :the most effective way for businessperson to maximize profits is the highest standards of ethics

 

题库：111“The most effective business leaders are those who maintain the highest ethical standards.”“最有效率的企业领导是保持最高道德标准的人。”

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16、1次 ——“你的隐私我该不该知道？”——黄金

版本：AI：Employers should have the right to obtain information of their employees' health or other private aspects without their permission.意思是这样的，具体的就不记得了..

 

题库：60 “Employers should have no right to obtain information about their employees’ health or other aspects of their personal lives without the employees’ permission.”“没有雇员的同意时，雇主应该没有权力去了解他的雇员的健康状况和其他的私人生活方面的信息。”

 

17、 1次——艺术展览应该因为人们的反对而取消吗？

版本：  No art exhibition or public performance should be cancelled because of the community's objection to its content.

 

18、1次 ——世界公民VS国家公民——黄金

版本：AI:“With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.” “随着对全球经济和跨国公司的关注增加，人们需要理解他们作为世界公民的角色比作为一个特定国家的公民的角色更重要。”

题库：40 “（同上）”

 

19、1次 ——谁来解决失业的问题——黄金

版本：I: As technologies and demand for certain services changed,some workers are laid off,so it is responsibility for individual workers to adjust this change,not to government or to business

 

题库：87 “As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”“当某项特定服务的技术和需求改变时，很多工人将失业。适应这种改变的责任属于每个工人而不是政府或企业。”

 

20、1次 ——听谁的指挥——黄金

版本：AI的题目是people are likely to accept people as leader who perform an ability that he or she expect others to perform

 

题库：33 “People are likely to accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated an ability to perform the same tasks that he or she expects others to perform.” “人们只愿意接受这样的领导：他能完成他要求其他人完成的任务。”

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21、1次 ——要不要遵守法律——？不知道是不是B5

版本：2.说的是people have the duty to disobey the laws they consider unjust

 

22、1次 ——？？可能是关于暴力问题的——？？题库1 or B8？？

版本：ISSUE: In order to preserve the national security, government should be authorized to do......they wish.(不好意思，表述不完整，大致意思就是出于国家安全的考虑，政府应被授权采取任何措施)

 

23、1次——？？技术发展对人的作用——？？题库20 or 上列10？？

版本：ISSUE:many people say that we have put too much resourses in computers, however, computers bring convenience to our life 大概这个意思

 

24、1次——[这种题目真讨厌，跟10一块搞吧]

版本：I:教育应当培养科学怪人。对否？

 

25、1次——国家安全问题？？

版本：AI: In order to preserve national security, countries should be authorized to keep secret of any information they wish

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26、1次——什么样的教育体系——黄金

版本：AI:说人们是否应该支持国家保持一个强调竞争的教育体系，这个教育体系培养小孩能更好的去与别人或者别的国家的小孩竞争。

题库：100 “If a nation is to ensure its own economic success, it must maintain a highly competitive educational system in which students compete among themselves and against students from other countries.”“如果一个国家要确保它的经济成功，它必须保持有高度竞争力的教育系统，在其中学生们相互竞争，还和国外的学生进行竞争。”

 

27、1次——要不要延长寿命

版本：AI,attmpting to significantly extend life span is a mistake.

题库：B2. Although most people wish to live long lives, attempting to significantly extend the average human life span would be a mistake. If achieved, this would place an enormous burden on resources, lowering the quality of life for everyone.

 

28、1次——教育为首——黄金

版本：ISsue: education is the most provider for the success. As money and (忘了) used to be, 教育将成为最重要的element for success.

题库：12 “Education has become the main provider of individual opportunity in our society. Just as property and money once were the keys to success, education has now become the element that most ensures success in life.”“教育已经成为我们的社会里个人机会的主要提供者。就像财富和金钱一度是成功的关键一样，教育现在已经成为确保成功的最重要因素。”

 

29、1次——选址的重要性——黄金

版本：AI: Location is one of the most important determinators for a business's success. No matter how advanced the computer communications and other technologies are.

题库：26 “Location has traditionally been one of the most important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of location is not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computer communications and others kinds of technology becomes.”“从传统上讲地址是一家企业成功的最重要决定因素。不论计算机通讯和其他技术发展的如果先进，地址的重要性将不会改变。”

 

30、1次——事业与生活，舍弃谁收获谁——黄金

版本：39. “It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”

题库：39“（同上）”“人们要在不牺牲实现个人生活的重要方面的情况下达到专业成功是很难的。”

 

 

31、1次——技术的尴尬——黄金

版本：AI：Technology ultimately separates and alienates people more than it serves to bring them together.

题库：115“（同上）”从根本上说，科技使人们疏远远甚于使人们聚合在一起。

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6、2次——水果涨价谁来负责——黄金

版一：AA: over decades,the price of citrus fruit increase.在Megamart的价钱从5cent涨到了30cent在过去的11年里，这个期间只有一年的天气unfavorable to citrus grow. 最后得出结论，growers 应该对涨价负责，同时应该实行strict pricing regulation去抑制continuing inflation price.

版二：AA 说一系列水果在过去的十年间价格显著上升，因为过去十一年间柠檬的价格从5涨到30。而这是一年间只有一年天气不利于生长。所以种植者应当为价格上涨负责，他们控制了价格，应当有相应的法规出台限制他们操控价格。（大意哈）

 

题库92 The following is taken from an editorial in a local newspaper.

“Over the past decade, the price per pound of citrus fruit has increased substantially. Eleven years ago, Megamart charged 5 cents apiece for lemons, but today it commonly charges over 30 cents apiece. In only one of these last eleven years was the weather unfavorable for growing citrus crops. Evidently, then, citrus growers have been responsible for the excessive increase in the price of citrus fruit, and strict pricing regulations are needed to prevent them from continuing to inflate prices.”当地报纸的社论： 过去的10年里，桔类水果的价格实际上上升了。11年前，Megamart每个柠檬要价5分，现在一般要价为30分一个。过去11年只有一年不适合桔类水果生长。显然，柑桔种植者应该对桔类水果价格过度上涨负责。为防止他们继续哄抬价格规范价格规定很有必要。

 

7、2次——要不要买电脑——黄金

版一：AWA的JJ：argument： 说apex公司给managers买电脑还有connection与公司的data连接。这样managers就可以在家里工作了。然后apex公司就productivity就提高了。结论是如果别的公司也这样做得话，那么employees就会多工作了。

版二：先写AA：AA的题目是Apex 公司buy computer for managers in homes and pay for the fee of connection 这样manager 在家可以查到公司的date ，第二年，the productivity of Apex 上涨了15%。所以很多公司准备给员工配置家用电脑提高profit。我写的三个点一个是买电脑和productivity没有直接联系，数据来源还有productiviry并不等于profit。

题库97 The following appeared as part of an article in a computer magazine.“A year ago Apex Manufacturing bought its managers computers for their homes and paid for telephone connections so that the managers could access Apex computers and data files from home after normal business hours. Since last year, productivity at Apex has increased by 15 percent. Other companies can learn from the success at Apex: given home computers and access to company resources, employees will work additional hours at home and thereby increase company profits.”电脑杂志的文章： 一年前Apex制造公司给它的经理们在家买了电脑，并支付电话费，这样他们就可以在工作时间以外从家里连接到Apex的电脑和数据文件。从去年开始，Apex的生产能力增长了15%。其他公司可以借鉴Apex的成功，提供家用电脑和到公司资源的链接，雇员会在家里加班并提高公司利润。

 

8、2次——3倍的利润？？——不详（未查） PS：以下两个应该是一个意思吧

版一：作文 1.说的是gerage 开了个店在small colleage town 然后很红 所以他计划再在周围的town 开店 ，并雇佣他以前的员工当经理 这样的话 他的profit 就能三倍了

版二：作文2：一个人2年前在一个叫Sallon的地方开了家餐厅并且很成功，这个地方是一个大学所在地所以有很多学生，他打算在nearby towns and cities再开3家餐厅，并请他一手带出来的3个员工去管理，他estimate这三家餐厅能triple profits.

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9、2次——改善旅游业的建议——不详（未查）

 

版一：AA想起来了,是讲一封政府顾问写给政府的信,大意如下:

Werneria的支柱产业是旅游业,但在Werneria的国家公园(national parks)没有以前那么有吸引力了(attractive),表现在最近5年来,旅游业的利润(revenue)持续下滑.近期在这些国家公园内发现了大型矿石储藏(large minaral deposits).因此,政府应该允许矿物公司开采这些矿石(permit the mining in the national parks),因为矿物公司将提供可观的税收收入(substantial tax revenue)和数以百计的就业岗位(hundreds of job positions),而未来旅游业的收益还将继续下滑.

版二AA：一个W国家由于工业污染的增加导致了旅游业收入的下降，在一些国家公园里新近发现了大量的矿藏，如果发展采矿工业的话那些矿业公司一定可以给政府带来可观的税收并为原来在旅游业工作的工人们hundreds的工作机会，所以增加……（*&……￥&收入的最好方法就是允许采矿工业的发展。

 

10、2次——飞机场利润下降怎么办——未查

 

版一：Argument:说有一个P航空公司，利润下降，这期间油价上涨了，而且它增加了飞机数量，进行了expansion。在这期间其他航空公司也经历了油价上涨，但是有一些还是提高了利润，所以P利润下降跟油价上涨没有关系，而应该是增加了飞机导致的，因此作者得出结论说应该取消那些增加的飞机。

版二：AA:去年利润掉了20%，油价上涨并且增加了5个航班 因为其他航空公司也面临着油价上涨的问题 但是有些公司利润上升了 因此应该取消增加的5个航班

 

11、2次——什么医院好——不详

 

版一：Argument：whether the quality of care at university hospital is lower than that of other kinds of hospitals.

版二：AA：There is a common misconception that university hospitals are better than community or private hospitals. This notion is unfounded, however: the university hospitals in our region employ 15 percent fewer doctors, have a 20 percent lower success rate in treating patients, make far less overall profit, and pay their medical staff considerably less than do private hospitals. Furthermore, many doctors at university hospitals typically divide their time among teaching, conducting research, and treating patients. From this it seems clear that the quality of care at university hospitals is lower than that at other kinds of hospitals

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AWA——AA（１6+3+3+1+2+5+1=31）

 

1、3次——奢侈品店要干吗——不详（未查）

版一：AA is about a grocery store called Green.?.. is trying to increase its sales. It usually attract wealthy people by providing luxury and expert service. Now, this store is trying to cut down its 10 employees per store, and decrease its expensive product and free samples.  In addition, it is going to corporate with another coffee shop share the same target of customers.

版二： Argument：一个luxury，很expensive的食品公司，sales从来都很高，但是profit却逐渐下降，然后speaker认为应该裁掉10个人，然后取消食品展览和free samples。再是跟一个当地的coffee cafe（不明白这两个词怎么会连在一起，还说是英文考试）合作，因为他们提供的产品层次差不多，然后可以利用他们来attract 更多的顾客，使得顾客数量上升。

版三：AA: Green Grocers has been experiencing high sales volume but decreasing profit margin.  Its customers are wealthy people looking for gourmet food and luxury shopping experience, so it must cut costs without hurting the customers' shopping experience. Therefore Green Grocers plans to lay off 10 employees and eliminate some expensive products and free sample. It will also partner with ** Cafe. Since according to a survey, the Grocers and the Cafe attract similar types of customers. As a consequence, Greentree Grocers will experience high sales volume and gain high profit margin.

 

2、3次——我们的救护车（West Combria）反映时间长——题库32——黄金

版一：West Combria Volunteer Ambulance Service VS East Combria Commercial Service

版二： ARGUMENT: 最近一个review（关于城北）显示volunteer ambulance service spends longer time. 之前一个report（城南）显示commercial ambulance service 怎样怎样。为了提供更好的服务和raise revenue，应该disband volunteer 的 hire commercial的

版三：AA32. The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper. “A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

 

3、2次——转行做电台广告——题库124——黄金

版一： 讲一个卖衣服的店说，卖唱片的店在电台投广告以后，生意好了，所以他们的店也要把报纸广告转成电台广告。

版二：Arguement是 The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Carlo’s Clothing to the staff.“Since Disc Depot, the music store on the next block, began a new radio advertising campaign last year, its business has grown dramatically, as evidenced by the large increase in foot traffic into the store. While the Disc Depot’s owners have apparently become wealthy enough to retire, profits at Carlo’s Clothing have remained stagnant for the past three years. In order to boost our sales and profits, we should therefore switch from newspaper advertising to frequent radio advertisements like those for Disc Depot.”

 

4、2次——什么公司什么产品换包装——不详（未查）

版一：AA说一家什么cereal公司觉得自己的商品含的Vitamin K高25%，然后一项调查又说超过75%的消费者多说他们公司的口味比别家的好，但是销量却不佳，得出结论是消费者对于该公司产品的优点不清楚，于是决定改变产品包装，让这两个优点出现在包装上

版二：AA:那道 BC cereal with 20% higher vitamin K, 大家参考已有机经

 

5、2次——要不要形成一个多样化经营的万能商店——题库44——黄金

版本： aa xdf紫色作文讲义P68-argu第44题 一个grocery store this year有了increase of total sales since it opened a pharmacy  section,所以计划增加clothing department……

版二：AA The following is part of a business plan created by the management of the Megamart grocery store.“Our total sales have increased this year by 20 percent since we added a pharmacy section to our grocery store. Clearly, the customer’s main concern is the convenience afforded by one-stop shopping. The surest way to increase our profits over the next couple of years, therefore, is to add a clothing department along with an automotive supplies and repair shop. We should also plan to continue adding new departments and services, such as a restaurant and a garden shop, in subsequent years. Being the only store in the area that offers such a range of services will give us a competitive advantage over other local stores.”