作文摸板是要的,但是鉴于现在美国鬼子知道中国学生都用摸板,而且大都千篇一律,因此
一定得有自己的特色,特别是开头句。因为第一印象重要呀!(我练口语的时候看到过一段
关于美国人的CHARACTER的短文就是:。。。。。Easily exicted,therefore Americans
are always deceived by their impressions,which are only transient!),因此,
写作文的时候我就想利用利用鬼子的弱点,没想到真灵了,MY GOD!当然,一旦自己有了特
色模板,还要用熟它,要和自己的论证联贯。这样才会让鬼子觉得你不是在套用模板,而是
自然流露。
另外,我不赞成以前很多人的观点——千方百计地用GRE词汇(所谓的难词),首先我觉得鉴
于对GRE难词大多数人(牛人除外)只是认识而已,未必用的准确,用于句之中让美国人觉得
未必贴切。另外,难词很难保证拼写对,所以,我觉得从这角度说,用的难词多未必好!我
的作文没有用太难词,但是自我感觉还贴切,用了一些以前练过口语的地道短语:比如LIFE
IS FULL OF UPS AND DOWNS,A NEW BRAND OF 。。。 ,这些都是鬼子挂在嘴边的,又似
乎很贴近他们的口味。
Since most important issues are mutifaceted,there are alternatives to
choose from,each with its unique advatanges and diaadvantages.The title
statement,whether we should choose friends who are similar to us or those
who are different from us,is not exceptional.To support one side between
the two is a matter of balancing its pros and cons.As far as i am
concerned, i would prefer to choose friends who are similar to us.
AS we can see,simialr friends means having similar characters,sharing more
likes and dislikes,thus understanding each other more easily.When we are
exposed to a new environment,we often feel depressed and frustrated,then we
intend to seek our new brand of friends,especially those who are similar to
us.I illurstrate this example just in an attempt to state one fact that we
are inherently inclined to choose friends who are similar to us.
The above reason is only one part ,another aspect of my reasons lies in the
fact that friends
who are similar to us are more helpful than those who are different from
us.Life is full of ups and downs,when in trouble,we try to count on simialr
friends for help in that the way they deal with difficulties may be more
appropriate and comfortable to us .
。。。。。。忘了一段(对不起)
Admittedly,different friends are also very important and helpful to us. One
extreme manifestation of its advantages is that we can learn more distinct
merits from friends who are
different from us.
If all these factors are contemplated,therefore,I think I would like to
choose friends who are similar to us .
from Gter
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