大全31. A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.
(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(C) After passing through a red giant stage, a star’s mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
答案是D .看了讨论还是没明白,E错在什么地方?
(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
problem 1: after (the mass of a star) passing through... is illogical.
problem 2: The mass of a star, ... will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.
what does "it" refer to?
if 'it' = the mass, the sentence, whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf , is illogical. 'itself' is not correct either.
problem 3: "will" is also debatable.
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