OG上有很多这种用法都是错的

白勇的说上说这种用法一定错，但是在张道真的书上就有这种用法的例子。

求教一下到底这能不能作为错误排除啊

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178. In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences. which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have

(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have

(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have

(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has

(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has

选项D 中出现了该用法，OG说D is wordy and imprecise (in their performing of specific jobs).

我的问题是，我们此结构在GMAT考试中是不是一个绝对错误的结构

这题D和E的区别并不是介词短语用的对不对，而是D中的in their performing of中performing是动名词，比E中直接用动词wordy.