GWD6-29的答案是:Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.
句子的结构是:XXX parents are more likely than XXXV parents to have children who as XX are xxxxxxx,xxxx,and xxx
这样的句式正确吗?
这种句式是可以允许的,而且有它的优势所在。因为不定式太长,要放在中间的话反倒是阻碍了比较对象的比较关系。
而这种把比较对象紧密联结的做法又常见又是非常有效地避免歧义的好方法。
有人认为这样才对:
XXX parents are more likely than are XXXVparents to have children who as XX are xxxxxxx,xxxx,and xxx
对了,你不是认为as XX中的XX与前面的XXX和XXXV有关系吧。。。它是介宾,只与who发生关系。
凭语感,我读上去,觉得没有问题。
楼上mm提到的是省略问题。
省略的关键不是有固定模式决定哪里省哪里不省,
而是不造成歧义为标准。窃以为在上文中省略be动词不会造成歧义。
讨论。
rather than 可以放句首,不过不定式的to要省去。但是很少看见这马用的
simiar to 是不能放句首的,一放就错,可以判断。
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