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标题: 【GMAT Tip】Choosing the Best Answer on Sentence Correction [打印本页]

作者: christ    时间: 2016-1-6 15:49     标题: 【GMAT Tip】Choosing the Best Answer on Sentence Correction

This GMATPrep® Sentence Correction question was sent to us by a student who got stuck between two choices and couldn’t decide which was right. It is a perfect example of the fact that the GMAT asks you to choose the best version of the sentence from among the five choices given, not the best possible version. Let’s take a look:

Regarded by opponents as ineffective and meddlesome and by supporters as a conserver of life and energy, the fight over the speed limit continues in our legislatures and on our freeways.

(A) Regarded by opponents as ineffective and meddlesome and by supporters as a conserver of life and energy, the fight over the speed limit continues in our legislatures and on our freeways.
(B) Regarded by opponents as ineffective and meddlesome and by supporters as a conserver of life and energy, the speed limit continues to be fought over in our legislatures and on our freeways.
(C) Regarded by opponents as ineffective meddling and by supporters as the conservation of life and energy, the speed limit continues to be fought over
in our legislatures and on our freeways.
(D) The fight over the speed limit, regarded by opponents as ineffective and meddlesome and by supporters as a conserver of life and energy, continues in our legislatures and on our freeways.
(E) The fight over the speed limit, a measure regarded by opponents as ineffective and meddlesome and by supporters as a conserver of life and energy, continues in our legislatures and on our freeways.

The original sentence contains a misplaced modifier. Logically, it is not “the fight over the speed limit” that would be “regarded by opponents as ineffective and meddlesome and by supporters as a conserver of life and energy,” but the speed limit itself. With this in mind, we can immediately eliminate any choices in which the modifier beginning with “regarded” appears to modify “the fight over the speed limit” rather than “the speed limit”: choices A, D, and E. Do not be fooled by the fact that “speed limit” comes right before the modifier in choices D and E. It still appears as part of the phrase “the fight over the speed limit” and still creates a misplaced modifier.

Now we must look at choices B and C comparatively. Since both of them use the passive construction “the speed limit continues to be fought over,” neither one is perfect. However, choice C’s descriptions of the speed limit as “ineffective meddling” and “the conservation of life and energy” make it decidedly more wrong, so choice B is correct.

Is choice B perfect? Hardly. It’s a bit awkward, it puts the modifier in the beginning when it would be much clearer to put it in the middle, and it uses the passive voice. However, it is clearly the best of the five choices given.


作者: somebody2    时间: 2016-1-7 09:37

很好的tip,学习了
作者: Qihui    时间: 2016-1-8 12:24

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作者: Alinaa    时间: 2016-1-11 13:44

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作者: Babi    时间: 2016-1-13 11:29

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作者: ellipse    时间: 2016-1-18 15:18

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作者: profuse    时间: 2016-1-22 11:16

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作者: Recession    时间: 2016-1-25 15:35

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作者: turret    时间: 2016-1-26 17:09

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作者: kane8912    时间: 2016-1-29 11:32

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作者: Pandaa    时间: 2016-2-1 17:36

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作者: Functional    时间: 2016-2-4 11:27

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作者: stady    时间: 2016-2-16 15:57

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作者: trice    时间: 2016-2-18 11:25

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作者: Endeara    时间: 2016-2-22 11:10

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作者: profuse    时间: 2016-2-23 12:45

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作者: tending    时间: 2016-2-25 10:15

相信自己可以的,tip很有用啊
作者: Tigerr    时间: 2016-2-29 14:08

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作者: Migraine    时间: 2016-3-1 17:18

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作者: escape    时间: 2016-3-7 17:30

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作者: Discern    时间: 2016-3-8 16:20

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