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标题: 大全-567 [打印本页]

作者: sunjueliang    时间: 2005-10-20 13:41     标题: 大全-567

1. Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, is finding uses in medicine, archaeology, and criminology.E

(A) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, a technique called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,

(B) Originally developed for detecting air pollutants, having the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it, a technique called proton induced x-ray emission

(C) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which can quickly analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance without destroying it,

(D) A technique originally developed for detecting air pollutants, called proton-induced x-ray emission, which has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying it

(E) A technique that was originally developed for detecting air pollutants and has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying the substance, called proton-induced x-ray emission,

答案A,I choose E,why ?


作者: creativity    时间: 2005-10-21 19:37

E句子实在太拗口了;called修饰对象不清,可能是substance;有些表达不精良,如has the ability to analyze the chemical elements in almost any substance quickly and without destroying the substance。


作者: steveyangxt    时间: 2005-12-23 11:11

把修饰成分合理的分配在主语的两边是很好的选择,否则太长,反倒不流畅了。




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