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作者: waihou32 时间: 2013-6-27 20:20 标题: og 13 SC62 题

原题如下

62. Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(A) the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete

(B) Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terra-cotta warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it

(C) it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than 2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(D) more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

(E) more than 36 years were needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warriors that 700,000 artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi Huang, China’s first emperor, in his afterlife

答案是A。。。哪位牛牛能告诉我B哪错了嘛

B 、og解释为，Opening phrase is a dangling modifier because it does not describe the subject Qin Shi Huang; in addition, the sentence is awkward and unclear. opening phrase 不就是China’s first emperor。。。那不就是修饰QIN SHI HUANG 的嘛。。跪求解答还是我对opening phrase 这词理解错了呢

作者: trendysx 时间: 2013-6-28 06:22

秦始皇不能 Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement 八大奇观是金字塔和兵马俑。。。。。才能并列
然后就是后面一大串的修饰语没有并列起来读起来很不爽
感觉最后的it 是不是也多了啊前面有that

个人理解不一定准确

作者: stellalights 时间: 2013-7-1 06:00

这题就是rival的主体应该对等，秒选A。
同意楼上观点。

作者: emilyly 时间: 2013-7-2 06:25

这题就是rival的主体应该对等，秒选A。
同意楼上观点。

作者: waihou32 时间: 2013-7-3 05:58

忘了说划线部分是从 the army 到结束~

作者: waihou32 时间: 2013-7-3 06:03

秦始皇不能 Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement ...
trendysx 发表于 2013-6-28 06:22

嗯嗯嗯懂啦~有的时候og上的解释本身也很awkward的~ 谢谢abc呀呀呀一开始也是没有注意到这道题划线部分，以为是全划线呢谢谢啦

作者: waihou32 时间: 2013-7-3 20:21

这题就是rival的主体应该对等，秒选A。
同意楼上观点。
emilyly 发表于 2013-7-2 06:25

恩恩！只注意到普通的比较如unlike like contrast while 没想到这种rivaling也可以对比还是做题太死呀~

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