Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
这是原句，从这个错误的句子来看，in her book illiustrations应该是修饰capitalized这个动作的，意在限定一个范围；而carefully coordinating。。。这个就讨厌了：要修饰capitalized的话，从逻辑上来讲，不可能是结果，但也不应该是描述这个动作；而往前看，illustration，修饰这个名词倒是比较合理的，这样子这个意思就大致理出来了--正解是：
In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
大家说我这样分析对吗？？作者: henryest 时间: 2013-3-4 20:40
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
僅從語法的角度，沒有任何meaning成份--俺覺得是這樣分析的：
1、in her book illustrations修飾bp--bp跟book illustrations之間有什麽關係嗎？hmm...bp在book illustrations裏面。
2、coordinating的位置表示它修飾的不會是capitalized，而是illustrations。
open to discussion^^~
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