At an orientation meeting, the travelerswere told that a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation againsttyphoid fever would be needed by each of them.
A a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever would be needed by each of them
B they would need a visa, a landing card, and evidence of their being inoculated against typhoid fever
C they would need evidence of being inoculated against typhoid fever and a visa and landing card
D they would each need a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever
E they would need visas, landing cards, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever for each of them
A用了被动语态，这个不如主动好。
B和C的of being inoculated不如inoculation简洁，A of B的结构放两个名词更顺畅。
E把for each of them放在句尾不好，离修饰对象they太远了，容易有歧义。
D的they would each，each做同位语，这是优选结构.作者: Jeffrey-N 时间: 2013-2-19 06:59
明白了 谢谢！作者: xunjiejie88 时间: 2013-2-19 21:09
其实不是这个意思。 by each of them 是指 这三个东西每个都要 for each of them 是指每个人 但是E中 这个结构不好 D 也是说 每个人 they would each each 为人的 同位语
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