28-30: Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
A: with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting
B: where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead
C: with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
D: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
E: in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
根据比较对象一致原则,可以排除B,C; E的instead和unlike重复,排除;在A和E中就不确定了,我最后选的是D, 因为A的with 感觉很怪,具体哪里不对说不上来,而且 response to sunburn is more localized 也不如E的more localized response to sunburn简洁,不过E中的which指代好像也有问题,responses 还是sprains?
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which指代cuts and sprains.
试着解释一下;
a中with 短语放的位置容易引起修饰歧义,不知其修饰的内容是前是后。
e中的healing主语模糊,instead应该是省去。
d中的完成时态也有其合理性,持续的状态嘛。
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