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作者: ubccoming    时间: 2012-8-6 07:01     标题: 求助 OG 12 88 求助!

88.    Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.

(A)    Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B)    Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer,
produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C)    Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk,
who produced a body of work rooted
(D)    Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work that was rooted
(E)    Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work rooted both

E中为什么BOTH多余啊?有个BOTH不是刚好BOTH AND么?
Jazz pianist and composer是修饰Thelonious Monk么?这样2个名词可以这样当形容词一样用啊?
作者: mustard12    时间: 2012-8-6 20:59

both and  连接对象要平行
作者: LuckyStars    时间: 2012-8-7 21:21

第一点 E 选项中work 后面没有that 。这个that不能省略,这个句子有那种重句的意思,此句没有从句,完全一个整句,主语又混乱,所以错了。
2  Both 后面 in  the stride-piano tradition of Willie Smith  和Ellington 没法平行比较,所以错了。

3 A选项可能也会选 但是在人称后面一般都省略Be动词,加上who was ,which is ,等等这种很多是wordy的,OG 12 13版有不少例子。
作者: ubccoming    时间: 2012-8-8 06:28

明白了。。谢谢




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