The current economic downturn has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing on technology.
A. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing
B. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing
C. significantly reduced advertising income for both business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially when focused
D. reduced both business journals’ and general consumer magazines’ advertising income significantly, especially if focused
E. reduced advertising income significantly for both business journals, as well as for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing
reduced both business journals’ and general consumer magazines’ advertising income significantly
别开别的语法错误，想问business journals’ and general consumer magazines’ advertising income 这种表达是不是错误的，因为足够造成歧义，即既可是business journals’ 与general consumer magazines’ advertising income 并列，也可是business journals’advertising income 与 general consumer magazines’ advertising income 并列。我的思路对吗？请指正，谢谢
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B. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing
those指代什么呢？？
回搂主：
应是business journals’advertising income 与 general consumer magazines’ advertising income 并列
因为前半部分是所有格形式，只能理解为其后所属的名词因重复省去。
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