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标题: GWD争议题求教 [打印本页]

作者: supervivian    时间: 2012-6-20 06:58     标题: GWD争议题求教

A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.

A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison


C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man


E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man
求教:这题B和E有什么区别呢?哪个选项更好一些?


作者: nadou1    时间: 2012-6-20 10:19

高人帮助一下了。。。





















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作者: lightseekerS    时间: 2012-6-20 21:23

E吧,因为by a  black american前面有个one of,应该是强调一本书一

个作者,破折号后面的话B我觉得including&and重复了,而且和前面jean

toomer's CANE不平行吧?
作者: supervivian    时间: 2012-6-21 06:23

感谢!
作者: emmahsu    时间: 2012-6-22 07:45

一本书不一定只有一个作者啊
作者: Calcium99    时间: 2012-6-22 21:46

我觉得是black americans指人,所以破折号后面加人会更好




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