9. Based on records from ancient Athens,each year young Athenian women collaborated to
weave a new woolen robe that they used todress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this
robe depicted scenes of a battle betweenZeus, Athena's father, and giants.
(A) Based on records from ancient Athens,each year young Athenian women collaborated to
weave a new woolen robe that they used todress
(B) Based on records from ancient Athens,each year young Athenian women had collaborated
to weave a new woolen robe with which todress
(C) According to records from ancientAthens, each year young Athenian women collaborated
to weave a new woolen robe that they usedto dress
(D) Records from ancient Athens indicatethat each year young Athenian women collaborated to
weave a new woolen robe with which theydressed
(E)Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women hadcollaborated to
weave a new woolen robe for dressing
考点: 逻辑表达(Logical Predication) 句子结构(Grammatical Construction)、平行对称(Parallelism)
1) 分词短语在句首起状语作用,逻辑主语等于句子主语
2) indicate that…and that构成并列的宾语从句
3) 在正式书面语中,宾语从句中的that通常不能省略
(A) young Athenian women作为Based on…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑; 未划线部分的and that从语法上跟that theyused…平行,共同修饰a new woolen robe, 不符合逻辑.
(B) 逻辑主语错误;未划线部分的and that没有并行的对象; 关系代词which后应该接句子,
(C) young Athenian women作为According to…的逻辑主语,不符合逻辑;未划线部分的and that从语法上跟that theyused…平行,共同修饰a new woolen robe, 不符合逻辑
(D) 正确,句首没有使用分词短语,有效的避免的逻辑主语问题;indicatethat…and that构成了宾语从句的并行结构
(E) 未划线部分的and that没有平行的对象;indicate that的that不能省略;for doing表示目的不及todo有效.
句子结构: Records from…indicate that… and that..
这道题的答案我没什么问题,主要问题就是红色的部分:A 和 C 的 according to, based on 与逻辑主语的关系不太明白。
我一直认为 according to 和 based on 只是状语,后面的句子应该不受影响。比如:According to the record, the company attained ⋯⋯等等。
请问 这样用可不可以?
如果不行的话,请问according to 和 based on 以及类似的这类短语应该是修饰什么样的主语?
谢谢!
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