22.Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home; he once turned a broken goblet into a dinner bell and a cake mold into a lamp. (A) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art and also believed in recycling at home; he (B) Alexander Calder, for whom old pieces of junk was often made into sculpture, believed in recycling at home and (C) A believer in recycling at home, sculptor Alexander Calder often made use for old pieces of junk in his art; he (D) Alexander Calder, for whom sculpture was often made from old pieces of junk, also believed in recycling at home, for example, he (E) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art, also believed in recycling at home; he E 是正确答案.
想請教兩個問題
1.正確答案E中 不會造成run down sentence嗎?
(E) Sculptor Alexander Calder, who often made use of old pieces of junk in his art, also believed in recycling at home; he
這裡he前面不需要一個連接詞來連接兩個句子嗎?
2.請問A哪裡不對? 我個人是覺得A應該比E來的更平衡
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