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作者: sherryke    时间: 2011-10-15 06:53     标题: og12 sc 68中的wordy 的问题

如题~
68
-The first trenches that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but independently of the more celebrated city-states of southern Mesopotamia, in what is now southern Iraq.
(A) that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence for centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East that were arising simultaneously with but
(B) that were cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously with but also
(C) having been cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East were arising simultaneously but
(D) cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, yields strong evidence of centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arising simultaneously but also
(E) cut into a 500-acre site at Tell Hamoukar, Syria, have yielded strong evidence that centrally administered complex societies in northern regions of the Middle East arose simultaneously with but


og对于A,C都有wordy的解释,
对A:that were cut
对C: having been cut

这怎么wordy了呢?
求NN指点~!!!先谢谢啦~
作者: YEWCHOW    时间: 2011-10-15 20:09

that were 是错误标志
having been 太长了吧 有一个词的cut在 还敢出来
作者: sherryke    时间: 2011-10-16 20:30

我觉得A的前半句话有点陈述事实的意思,所以应该用一般现在时,所以

应该用cut,所以that were应该排除~
             having 的那个我还是不理解,求解答的详细些,谢谢啦~
作者: Roro666    时间: 2011-10-18 06:34

having been done 这种形式是典型的错误结构
作者: sherryke    时间: 2011-10-18 20:41

那请问,以后是看到having been done就是错吗?
作者: cyvivi    时间: 2011-11-7 06:36

定语从句作定语与分词短语作定语的区别
(1)定语从句强调具体时间具体动作,以及动作的一次性;分词短语强调笼统不确定的时间,抽象/客观/重复性/多次性的行为 ? 故定语从句变为分词时会少掉时态
(2)都可以接受时,分词短语优于定语从句(更简洁),定语从句要尽量转换为分词短语(但不能引起歧义)
(3)定语从句包含情态动词时不能转化为分词短语
(4)ing分词的完成时态不能充当名词的定语,必须转化为定语从句n.+ having done n. that…




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