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标题: GWD21-Q27 看了很多贴还是有点不明白 [打印本页]

作者: yidiyuehans    时间: 2011-3-29 07:17     标题: GWD21-Q27 看了很多贴还是有点不明白

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.
A.      to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs

B.       to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing

C.      is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs

D.      is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs

E.  is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

答案貌似是D。 我想问下,B错在哪里? 是which 还是weighing的歧义? 如何判断weighing修饰哪个词?
作者: yidiyuehans    时间: 2011-3-29 19:58

weighing是对的??
作者: laurawang2234    时间: 2011-3-30 06:48

weighing是错的,从逻辑上来看,weighing修饰的是宾语了。而应该是修饰

主语。
作者: yidiyuehans    时间: 2011-3-30 19:47

那它是修饰handheld computer的还是主句中的what呢?

我看到有的贴说weighing直接修饰主句,忽略中间的插入语,是这样吗?
作者: 小宇宙2010    时间: 2011-4-2 19:38

weighing is wrong, because the final phrase can be understood to

modify " the company".
作者: dandanapple    时间: 2011-4-18 06:44

The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.
A.略.
B.to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
B选项分析:
1 由于in the world修饰camcorder,因此which可以指代camcorder,weighing现在分词做状语修饰camcorder;
2 to be the smallest camcorder in the world,不如world's smallest camcorder简洁。
3 平行结构:which is … and, weighs …平行。
作者: sayysong    时间: 2011-4-18 21:11

请问E错在哪里?是that of还是weighing的修饰问题?谢谢!
作者: suners    时间: 2011-4-19 02:10

回复 7# sayysong


    关于E,我觉得最突出的错误就是所谓的awkward或者wordy,the length of which is that of XXX,为什么要这么麻烦呢。weighing有指代歧义也是一个因素。




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