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作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:21 标题: 9月27GMAT考试作文AI新题更新

6 panovation; nfdsm;yd72win; lixian; eilleenliu; bemyself2010 "V1 Employers should have the right to keep the employees from engage in 坏习惯, both in workforce or in personal lives.

V2 Employers have the rights to prohibit the unhealthy behaviors of employees, both in the workplace and their personal lives" 9.16 9.16 9.18 9.18 9.21 9.21

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:23

4 Dechu;trandee; sarahLS; sabrina90125 How effectively a student learn depends more on the quality of the other student than the quality of the teachers. 9.16 9.20 9.21 9.24

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:24

3 B5 vijo；qizuko;hide23 public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things they do not personally experience. SHEET3 9.16 9.16 9.17

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:24

4 rikkina；tianjinerzhong; zhaoyusee；马甲A The most experienced candidate is usually the best candidate for the leadership position.（一个最有经验的员工往往是领导职位的最佳人选） SHEET5 9.16 9.16 9.18 9.23

Main point:   狗4

public figures should avoid expressing opinions in public about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by

On the one hand, normally public figures have many followers who treat the public figures as model, if public figures express themselves in a nonresponsible and superficial way, their followers may act accordingly.

Moreover, public figures are just human being like each of us, they are, in most cases, good at one field. It is unrealistic to expect them to give correct answers to all public questions. It is highly possible they will give non-sense answer to a question they never experienced or heard of.
Admittedly, it is hard to prevent all public figures from doing so since the wide spreading internet, TV programs. The possible way lies in educate public to listen to public figures with caution.

Overstate    狗4
the importance of the personal exp => There are many other ways to
butress an opinion: eg. education, research, discussion, learn from the past (other people's experience).
Oversimplify the issue => a
lead should speak for the people. So a lead does not qualify to speak for poors if he has never been poor in his life?

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:25

2 5 Jessielynn； kzf369 All groups and organizations should function as teams in which everyone makes decisions and shares responsibilities and duties. Giving one person central authority and responsibility for a project or task is not an effective way to get work done. SHEET2 9.16 9.26

犬5

第一段说确实没experience不能服众，因为没完成过自己手头上东西的人党领导大家很难信赖，比如克林顿逃兵役，就是个污点。Morover无法指导大家渡过难关。这貌似是另外一个作文的题目。
但是这不是说experience是唯一铸造leader的东西，一个好的leader还有知人善用，并且还要鼓励士气。
然后分两段写，鼓励士气是因为大家都是自私的，而团体目标有时候需要个人牺牲，因此需要大家开心的和合作交流之类的。知人善用是因为大家可能都觉得自己很牛，但是让学engineering的人去做销售经理显然是不合适的。

犬6（2）题库5
Thesis sentence: it is true that team work is the most familiar functional way that adopted by many groups and organizations. It is also true that every team member should share responsibilities and duties within the team. However, it is hardly true that the absence of central authority that enables everybody to make decisions is an effective way to get work done. 
Admittedly
1，所有人共同担负责任确实更有效
   Compared with giving the responsibility for a task to one authoritative person, the sharing of responsibilities and duties among team members is a more effective way to get things done. 
The allocated responsibility and duties give workers the feeling of being important and necessary that motivated them to fulfill their work.
The fact that anyone who dose not accomplish his or her assigned work thus affect the whole progress of the project could be easily detected, gives the necessary pressure to workers that guarantee the efficiency thus the completion of the project.
Nevertheless, that is not to say, people in a team should make decisions together.
1，但所有人都参与决策比一人决策效率高的说法不正确
   The claim that letting everyone to make decision rather than giving one person central authority is a more effective way to get things down is unwarranted.
   Everybody makes decisions totally no decisions.
Not everyone has acquired the essential abilities such as thorough analysis and foresighted prediction to make decisions.

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:26

2 105 loverwy; zhisnoopy "A society is measured more by scientific and artistic achievenments than by business successes.
" SHEET4 9.16 9.20

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:26

2 loveoaple; michael2011 Celebrities are uniquely qualified to address social problems, because of their high status and access to resources. 9.16 9.20
犬8 范文
“The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
It is tempting to concede the speaker’s opinion that achievements in art and science are more significant to the worth of a nation than its “mere” business successes. Still, I disagree with the view because it overlooks the several ways that commercial success supports artistic accomplishment and scientific progress. It also ignores the extent to which commercial success renders a nation more secure, and better able to promote human rights and political stability throughout the world.
First of all, art and science have always depended upon the patronage of successful business. Consider Italy’s powerful banking clan, the Medici family, and their support for artists such as Michelangelo (米开朗基罗[1475-1564,意大利文艺复兴时期成就卓著的科学家,艺术家]) and Raphael. Substantial scientific and artistic support now comes from foundations established by extraordinarily successful business families like the Rockefellers, Gettys, Carnegies and Mellons. In addition to their private-sector foundation funding, successful businesses also pay taxes that are returned to university art and science programs. And, many businesses form partnerships with universities to further scientific discovery and related technological progress. Finally, both art and science are highly successful business enterprises in their own right.
Secondly, the value of a nation is related to its ability to defend itself, and to help promote peace and justice among other nations. A nation is more capable in both regards when its businesses enjoy greater success. For example, the current return of Kosovars to their homeland was facilitated by a cost-intensive military effort that required funding from, among other sources, tax revenues from business. In addition, a wealthy nation can, by means of its trade agreements, use its economic strength to encourage other countries to extend greater human rights to their citizens. Finally, a wealthy nation can depend on an expansive weapons industry in the private sector; and it can fund an effective military to carry out national defense.
In sum, it is simplistic to suppose that achievement in art and science is more important to the value of a nation than the success of its businesses. The latter is essential to national and world security. And, business success is deeply connected to accomplishment in art and science.

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:36

狗10
"Thesis sentence:
To conserve the energy resources is a worldwide project; however, individual nations have been taken the responsibilities of energy conservation initiatively without international leadership."
"Admittedly
自私是人的天性。
Selfish is a human character.
No country would like to sacrifice itself to conserve energy while no other countries to do the same. If there is no such an organization, it is idealistic to expect individual nations to sacrifice its own interests to conserve energy."
"全球合作确实起到重要作用。
International leadership and worldwide cooperation do play important roles in the protection of energy resources.
OPEC is one of the best examples. OPEC, the Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries, is an international organization of eleven developing countries that are heavily reliant on oil revenues as their main source of income. Since oil revenues are so vital（关键的） for the economic development of these nations, they aim to bring stability and harmony（融洽） to the oil market by adjusting their oil output to help ensure a balance between supply and demand. The stabilized out-put has helped to cease the problem of over-refining（提纯） and over-utilization（使用） of oil energy for a long time.
"
"Nevertheless，that is not to say, it is impossible for individual nations to conserve energy independently.
1，不是说单个国家牺牲是不可能的
Factors other than international leadership and world wide cooperation have driven individual nations to conserve energy. These countries conserve energy purely for their own benefit in the future.
Japan is a country naturally with nearly no energy resources, so it make great effort to conserve energy for future generations. A famous case is that Japan once brought crude oil from other countries and buried it under the sea."

5 15 loveumyangel; CharleneWang; emilysmile; woyouhuashuo; anqi_ren "Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.”*
*The Internet is a worldwide computer network" SHEET2 9.16 9.16 9.19 9.21 9.24

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:36

2 loveoaple; michael2011 Celebrities are uniquely qualified to address social problems, because of their high status and access to resources. 9.16 9.20

犬8 范文
“The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
It is tempting to concede the speaker’s opinion that achievements in art and science are more significant to the worth of a nation than its “mere” business successes. Still, I disagree with the view because it overlooks the several ways that commercial success supports artistic accomplishment and scientific progress. It also ignores the extent to which commercial success renders a nation more secure, and better able to promote human rights and political stability throughout the world.
First of all, art and science have always depended upon the patronage of successful business. Consider Italy’s powerful banking clan, the Medici family, and their support for artists such as Michelangelo (米开朗基罗[1475-1564,意大利文艺复兴时期成就卓著的科学家,艺术家]) and Raphael. Substantial scientific and artistic support now comes from foundations established by extraordinarily successful business families like the Rockefellers, Gettys, Carnegies and Mellons. In addition to their private-sector foundation funding, successful businesses also pay taxes that are returned to university art and science programs. And, many businesses form partnerships with universities to further scientific discovery and related technological progress. Finally, both art and science are highly successful business enterprises in their own right.
Secondly, the value of a nation is related to its ability to defend itself, and to help promote peace and justice among other nations. A nation is more capable in both regards when its businesses enjoy greater success. For example, the current return of Kosovars to their homeland was facilitated by a cost-intensive military effort that required funding from, among other sources, tax revenues from business. In addition, a wealthy nation can, by means of its trade agreements, use its economic strength to encourage other countries to extend greater human rights to their citizens. Finally, a wealthy nation can depend on an expansive weapons industry in the private sector; and it can fund an effective military to carry out national defense.
In sum, it is simplistic to suppose that achievement in art and science is more important to the value of a nation than the success of its businesses. The latter is essential to national and world security. And, business success is deeply connected to accomplishment in art and science.

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:39

2 2 hyl_0212； walker31 “It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.” SHEET7 9.16 9.25

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:39

3 45 peggyye; grands; rainnight "(公司最有效的获得profit的途径是保持最高的道德) “The most effective way for a businessperson to maximize profits over a long period of time is to follow the highest standards of ethics.”
" SHEET4 SHEET8添加更新 9.16 9.17 9.24

犬11
Optional words:
Regulation/ law/ restriction
Limit/confine/.control/ hamper/ inhibit/
View1: adult material on the internet may have terrible affect on children with immature point of view and judgment.
Evidence: pornographic material. tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, and of how people ought to treat one another.
View2:since Internet has no national boundaries, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort.

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:40

4 115 sueyangyang;       xixixipanda;          CharleneWang;  flora_yj “Technology ultimately separates and alienates people more than it serves to bring them together.” SHEET8 9.16 9.16 9.16 9.20

犬12  思路
反面的例子可以是说如果从最高的道德规范来看有些污染环境的行业根本就不应该存在。但是从企业的长期发展来看以及从社会的福利最大化来看，只要污染控制在一定范围就好。如化工厂只要把排污控制在国家规定的范围就好。
1道德不明确，每个人的标准不一样             2法律立法时符合大多数人的要求明确具体       3时滞可以用提高立法效率来解决

1. 支持者会认为, 高道德会赢得reputation and trust; 第一, 高道德生产高质量的产品以及service,顾客稳定stable share of the market; 第二, 高道德会让员工满意度提高(公平，平等). 从而attract those applicants with high ability and keep the employees loyal to the company---最终导致高的productivity.          例子：Bayer, one of the largest pharmaceutic companies in the world, announced that the company would cease production of one of its major products, because of the hazardous ingredients it contained. By doing so, the company suffers great loss on profitability, but gains strong public support and understanding, which can contribute to the long-term success of the company.
2. 但在更多的情况下, 高道德也许不equal to maximal profit. 比如,a, 如果把道德放在第一位的话,企业的executive很可能无法执行裁员活动complete the normal administration, such as raising the price, reducing the superabundant staff…  b, 高道德的话，很可能采用最高标准的环保生产——这样很不是cost-effective. 总之，Following such undue concern about ethics, the company may find it impossible to survive in the radical competitive market, let alone to gain large profit.
View1: the definition of highest standards of ethics vary from person to person and time to time. Therefore, it isimpractical to find and then stick to the highest standards of ethics.

View2: the regulations and laws of authorities are more feasible and suitable standards to follow.

View3: while waiting for government regulations may draw back the processes of eliminating the ill actions, we can count on the authorities to speed up the process of refining the laws and regulations.

"狗12思路：                                                                                        View1: the definition of highest standards of ethics vary from person to person and time to time. Therefore, it is impractical to find and then stick to the highest standards of ethics.
View2: the regulations and laws of authorities are more feasible and suitable standards to follow.
View3: while waiting for government regulations may draw back the processes of eliminating the ill actions, we can count on the authorities to speed up the process of refining the laws and regulations."
"支持者会认为, 高道德会赢得reputation and trust; 第一, 高道德生产高质量的产品以及service,顾客稳定stable share of the market; 第二, 高道德会让员工满意度提高(公平，平等). 从而attract those applicants with high ability and keep the employees loyal to the company---最终导致高的productivity.
例子：Bayer, one of the largest pharmaceutic companies in the world, announced that the company would cease production of one of its major products, because of the hazardous ingredients it contained. By doing so, the company suffers great loss on profitability, but gains strong public support and understanding, which can contribute to the long-term success of the company.
但在更多的情况下, 高道德也许不equal to maximal profit. 比如,a, 如果把道德放在第一位的话,企业的executive很可能无法执行裁员活动complete the normal administration, such as raising the price, reducing the superabundant staff…  b, 高道德的话，很可能采用最高标准的环保生产——这样很不是cost-effective. 总之，Following such undue concern about ethics, the company may find it impossible to survive in the radical competitive market, let alone to gain large profit."
另一个思路
"Admittedly
高道德会赢得名誉和信任
Supporters of this assertion may assume that highest standards of ethics will win reputation and trust.
First, companies with high standards of ethics manufacture high-quality products and service, and have a stable share of the market.
Second, companies with high standards of ethics earn a high degree of job satisfactory from their employees so that they will attract those applicants with high ability and keep the employees loyal to the company."
"Nevertheless, that is not to say, following the highest standards of ethics is the most effective way for a businessperson to maximize profits over a long period of time.
1，最高标准很难界定
The definition of highest standards of ethics varies from person to person and time to time. Therefore, it is impractical to find and then stick to the highest standards of ethics.
很多情况下，高道德不等于高效率
High standard of ethic does not equal to maximal profit.
Executives of companies may not complete the normal administration, such as raising the price, reducing the superabundant staff, if they follow the highest standards of ethics.
In sum, following such undue concern about ethics, the company may find it impossible to survive in the radical competitive market, let alone to gain large profit."

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:40

2 37 anitasakuragi; FLOWERHEARTLR “Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities. 9.16 9.16

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:44

1 luke0305 "当下社会的进步，包括 business 和 tech 的进步使人们的生活质量空前地好。
" 9.16

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:44

6 wainilz520; nulinuli; ffffighting; liberzephyr; wendyqxw; dearsissi "V1.国家该不该有机密信息 V2.For the sake of national security, the governments should have the access to the library checkout records and Internet activity history of their citizens.
为了保护国家安全，政府可以对任何想保密的消息进行保密。
(考古)To preserve national security, the governments should be authorized to keep secret the information as they wish. V3.To preserve national security, governments should keep secret all the infomation." 9.16 9.18 9.18 9.19 9.20 9.21

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:45

4 40 mimi17260; shanzaizai; QQs； sofarlee “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.” SHEET8 9.16 9.20 9.24 9.25

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 10:48

1 B10 hzd515976083 Portrayals of violence have proven commercially successful in television programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therefore, those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate violence into their products. SHEET3 SHEET8添加更新 9.16

AI 狗17
提纲：

1 让步说这是导演/公司的自由把violance的东西加入到电影、歌曲等中来谋取利润
2 但是流行的东西容易过时，violance的东西也不利外，一直加这种东西人们也会腻，最后不一定能赚到钱
3 而且，violance的东西会对社会各方面造成不利影响。。。
总结，用violance的东西也不一定能赚钱，而且还对社会的发展不利，所以不同意。

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:01

3 26 Ivanka囡; limoster; 夕殿萤飞 Location has traditionally been one of the most important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of location is not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computer communications and others kinds of technology becomes. SHEET8 9.16 9.19 9.24

狗18
提纲：
1.艺术可以使人更好地投入到科学技术的研究中.起到一定的促进作用.For example, recent studies of cognitive development show that studying music at an early age can strengthen a child's later grasp of mathematics. And understanding philosophical concepts has helped scients recognize their own presuppositions, and frame their central questions more accurately.
2.从前人前辈的成就和伟大人格中我们可以得到促进和激励更好的投入到工作和学习生活中.
3.单独只有科学技术我们只能找到解决问题的办法。即我只是知道how to do而不知道should we do .... . This is not to say, however, that ... . To the contrary mathematicians cognitive strengthen grasp philosophical philosophy presupposition presumption premise assumption intellectual inspire dominate predominate autonomous autonomy liberal arts 文科 contemporary

1.科技十分重要，没有科学技能的人，很难快速容入工作。难以想象一个缺乏基本电脑知识的人，如何在一个corporation in which most of the daily affairs are dealt with the aid of computer里很好地完成工作！所以，学校有责任培养学生的IT技能。
2.但是，不代表学校应该忽视艺术人文的教育。众所周知，艺术人文起到启迪思想provide people with gracious spirit. 引导人们意识到人性中的固有美德：。。。举例：科学技术是人们生存发展的工具，但同时，如果没有美德，则可能变成危险的武器。比如nuclear weapons; heroin is made by people with standard chemistry knowledge…（with the guide of virtue, science can be the best servant of human; however, on the other hand, without such guide, it can become the most dangerous weapon.
3.false dilemma. The speaker falsely put the school in a dilemma by suggesting the teaching of science and that of arts are mutually exclusive. 完全可以把两者结合起来。

View1: primarily and secondary school, whose main function is to teach general knowledge and more important, to shape healthy personality, should place at least as much attention on the arts and humanities as they do on science and technology
View2: Contrarily, university and college should devoted more time on teaching science and technology as they are becoming more and more essential to our modern society. However, it dose not mean the Arts and humanities is not important and the time devoted to it should be decreased. Universities can increase the teaching hour on science and technology by ways such as employ more professors and open more available classroom to provide more courses at the same time.
View3: science and technology are becoming more and more important, yet, we still can not underestimate the importance of the arts and humanities.
Learning form predecessors’ experience and great personalities can lead to great efforts devoted to work and thus better performance. Science and technology tell us who to do, but humanities tell us what should to .

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:01

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5 65 littled;跳跳羊;  DorothyHong;    dullgirl; cissy0010 "V1.“The rise of multinational corporations is leading to global homogeneity*. Because people everywhere are beginning to want the same products and services, regional differences are rapidly disappearing.
* homogeneity: sameness, similarity                                                       V2.讲的是这个世界正在趋同，那么就不需要在区域上不同的产品了。" SHEET8 9.16 9.17 9.17 9.18 9.21

Admittedly    狗19思路
1，对一些传统企业来说，选址依然很重要
For many traditional businesses, location is still playing a fatal role on their success.
Take cosmetic selling for example. The revenue of these companies still largely relies on face-toface persuading. In addition, consumers may prefer to go to the cloth shop to try on the clothes while feeling the texture of them rather than stay at home looking at picture of clothes on computer.
Nevertheless, that is not to say, the development of computer communications and other kinds of technology brings no change about the importance of location.
1， 也带来改变
As computer technology and electronic communication become more and more convenient, the intangible（虚拟的） locations on the internet have replaced the location in the real world in some business areas
   Now the advanced technology can offer the same or even more convenient transportation, and also, with the help of internet, company can even sign a contract without seeing the other company. Taking advantage of the development of new techniques, many companies, such as DELL, a lot of internet retail stores, and online banks, win a significant success.

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:02

4 LprinceWang; cuppyan123; xige_01; xcwiam0 "V1最好的老师应该是鼓励学生challenge popular ideas的
V2 The best teacher is the one who expect the students to challenge the popular ideas rather than accept them." 9.16 9.17 9.20 9.20
[quote][/quote]

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:03

1 60 mirare “Employers should have no right to obtain information about their employees’ health or other aspects of their personal lives without the employees’ permission.” SHEET9 9.16

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:07

3 111 seraphfeng; 逃匿女王; irenezlc “The most effective business leaders are those who maintain the highest ethical standards.” SHEET9 9.16 9.24

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:08

本帖最后由 myice 于 2010-9-27 11:14 编辑

3 111 seraphfeng; 逃匿女王; irenezlc “The most effective business leaders are those who maintain the highest ethical standards.” SHEET9 9.16 9.24

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:08

4 yvonney512; paipai79; JESSIEUK； nceeterminator Physical activity and sports is as important in a student's academic s education 9.16 9.17 9.25 9.26

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:09

1 107 车轮圈圈 (经理们分配工作的最好的方式就是把复杂的工作分成简单的部分，这样每个workers都能为工作做出贡献。 ) The most effective way for managers to assign work is to divide complex tasks into their simpler component parts. This way, each worker completes a small portion of the task but contributes to the whole. SHEET5 9.17

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:11

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1 bendrift Constant innovation and change within anorganization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improveit. SHEET5 9.17

题库107 犬27
"1，分工是个有效的方式
Work division and assignment is an efficient way to get things done.
First of all, workers with few highly specific skills are usually cheaper to hire than those with broader education and experience.
Secondly, it is less expensive to train employees in narrow areas.
Finally, strict compartmentalization (n.区分, 划分) of tasks makes it easier for managers to control employees, and, therefore, to control and increase productivity.

Nevertheless, that is not to say, merely dividing work among workers can assure the final accomplishment of the task.
让员工觉得孤立
Fragmenting work into small units leads to employee alienation（孤立）.
Those responsible for only a detailed component of a project can easily lose sight of larger organizational goals and their own importance in achieving them, and then become less committed to their work, and less productive.
In addition, the lack of overall conception may lead to adjusting difficulties.
2，阻碍合作
Moreover, Compartmentalizing tasks can stifle（阻碍） cooperation.

My view
Team work is not to simply add one component to another, but to organically conform all components together"

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:15

1 bendrift Constant innovation and change within anorganization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improveit. SHEET5 9.17

题库107 犬27
"1，分工是个有效的方式
Work division and assignment is an efficient way to get things done.
First of all, workers with few highly specific skills are usually cheaper to hire than those with broader education and experience.
Secondly, it is less expensive to train employees in narrow areas.
Finally, strict compartmentalization (n.区分, 划分) of tasks makes it easier for managers to control employees, and, therefore, to control and increase productivity.

Nevertheless, that is not to say, merely dividing work among workers can assure the final accomplishment of the task.
让员工觉得孤立
Fragmenting work into small units leads to employee alienation（孤立）.
Those responsible for only a detailed component of a project can easily lose sight of larger organizational goals and their own importance in achieving them, and then become less committed to their work, and less productive.
In addition, the lack of overall conception may lead to adjusting difficulties.
2，阻碍合作
Moreover, Compartmentalizing tasks can stifle（阻碍） cooperation.

My view
Team work is not to simply add one component to another, but to organically conform all components together"

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:19

3 24 必须700加; nancy8888; solotomb;koudai “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official. SHEET6 9.17 9.18 9.18

题库A2 犬28
"When it comes to whether continuous innovation and change with an organization are more likely to worsen the organization than to improve it, different people have different opinions due to their respective angles. Weighing the merits and demerits arising from the innovation and change, I should say that I am a proponent of the existence of constant innovation and change within an organization.
To begin with, innovation and appropriate change can make an organization, in most cases, a better one. Not only innovation defined as the introduction of new ideas and methods is playing a decisive role in operations of organizations, but also sometimes even little Change makes sense. There is a good example to describe that a shopping mall that tends to increase its sales extends its business hours to adjust customers’ changing behavior due to the switch of seasons.

In addition, it is a universal truth that change is the principle of universe. Any organization cannot avoid changing exclusively, while all the other organizations are changing. For example, nowadays most of companies establish an electronic system of finance and accounting. It is the standard that all individuals in this circumference should conform. Hence, under this condition, not the convenience of trading with other companies matters, but the fact that without such a standard system, the business cannot go on.

Admittedly, on occasion it seems that change and innovation undermine organizations’ operation. But I believe that the problem is more likely to result from other factors other than the innovation itself. For instance, some managers introduce unsuitable change and innovation, following other companies’ successful myth blindly.

In sum, to maximally harness innovation and to fully prepare for the change of circumference, it is wise to take a positive attitude to constant innovation and change within the organization. Furthermore, the implementation of introduce innovation and change is a net of variables so that we should take a careful consideration into the real reason when the organization suffers problem.
likui练笔 A2思路http://forum.Topway.com/GMAT_AWA/thread-131214-1-1.html"

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:20

4 billzhangheng; qcaa1107;  EE11;ggghost "V1 People have duty to disobey the laws they consider unjust.
V2 如果人们不喜欢法律就能不遵守
V3 People should not disobey laws even though they consider them unjust." 9.17 9.18 9.19 9.20
犬29
提纲：
1.         每一个政府官员都很难自己做出决策。每一个政令的颁布表面上仿佛是由一个人宣布的，其实背后的程序过程都是十分繁杂的。seperation of the three powers(the legislative, executive and judicial powers) In this work he argued that the three powers a state has are the Legislative, the Executive and the Judicial and that for a state to remain democratic, these powers must be separated and there must be checks and balances to prevent a single group from acquiring control over two or more of them.
任何一个政府官员做出决定都可能受到上司甚至是同事的限制，即使是总统，其实也仅仅是他的领导班子共同商议做出结论，更何况三权分立在保护了民主的同时本身也限制了每个个人甚至是每个group的决策权利以及对国家和社区的影响。
2.         而企业领导往往会有更大的决策权，而他们的决策也更容易被贯彻。在一个经济为中心的国家相应的他们的对社区和国家的影响力也就更大。
3.         诚然在一个以政治为中心的国家里，企业领导对社区和国家产生影响的机会会较少，但经济是政治的基础，离开经济政治是毫无影响力可言的。此外由于上面所说过的原因政府官员对社区和国家的影响同样不会很大。

1.         Admittedly, 领导人的作用有时不象企业家一样apparent. 因为国家的发展，人们的生活，与企业closely related. 比如GATES，领导了信息产业革命；Rockefeller，控制国家的石油命脉took control of  American oil supply。企业家通过影响企业的行为，从而直观上影响人course of a community.
2.         但是，企业的一切影响is based on its existence, which is permitted by the government. 政府制定各种policy来允许企业的存在，企业家的一切行为需要被政府允许才能产生作用。
3.         Moreover, 影响一个国家，需要强大的power, which can be only generated from absolutely authority. 这样的绝对权力是企业不具备的。Yet even a cursory review of the history reveals substantial evidence that it is the government leader rather than the business leader that can make the pivotal decision when the nation is in crisis. 比如，在经济recession，企业的力量无法使经济好转，revive the economy of the whole nation, 只有政府运用行政措施，制定positive policy to stimulate the companies and thus the economy of the whole nation. 比如Roosevelt. Bill Clinton.  financial policy

1.         Unlike business leader, government power is likely to subject to many more restraints.  Our check-and-balance system, the legislation influence and the voting power are all factors that temper the power of government official to the course of a community or a nation. Moreover, powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold the actual legislative and judicial power by their financial supporting of official activities such as governmental elections.
2.         While take more thorough consideration, the government official is likely to have more direct and broad influence on a community and a nation.
Evidence: various approach to influence other than financial approach
In addition the governmental official have the abilities to regulate commerce,

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:21

1 33 athenelynn People are likely to accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated an ability to perform the same tasks that he or she expects others to perform SHEET3 9.17

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:22

4 yysbinzhou; justsoxxg; Kay001 ；syflysun At the fast-paced world, employers can benefit more from energy and new ideas of younger workers than experience and wisdom of older workers. 9.17 9.21 9.25

Q犬31
提纲：
1.       人们不会尊重一个不能完成他要求别人完成的任务自己却不能完成的领导。这是人之常情，人们通常都只会欣赏和尊敬比自己优秀的人，而不喜欢被一个不能完成任务却命令自己去做的人心存敬意。例如克林顿总统当commander-in-chief 的时候，由于众所周知他曾经逃避兵役，很自然的下级军官和士兵都不是很尊重他。
2.       人们不信任一个自己完不成任务却要求别人去完成的人。仍然举克林顿总统的例子。由于他逃兵役被视为没有能力，下级都对他的决策心存怀疑，这也就潜在的导致了执行上的不尽心不尽力。
3.       诚然是否能完成自己交给别人的任务并不是衡量一个leader重要指标。可能领导能力、,组织能力、运筹能力更为重要，但是我们不能忽视人们心理上的看法，尽管它可能并不合理但它确实是存在的。

1.       诚然，如果在其领导的领域内几乎一窍不通，一个领导很难得到下属的信任和支持，会被看作layperson. 比如，人们无法想象一个不具备任何电脑知识的人，该如何领导一个庞大的IT企业，比如MICROSOFT在激烈的市场中竞争。
2.       但是，这是否意味着作为领导，必须要有能力完成每一项他要求下属做的事呢？这个问题，与领导和员工的真正作用有很大关系！首先，领导的职责是制定长期的发展方针，并且保证这个方针的贯彻执行，adhere to their strategic plans不被偏离。组织员工共同合作完成任务。on the other hand, 员工的作用是各司其职，更加具体的specific task.
3.       从以上两种职责不难看出，领导与员工起到significantly different functions，让领导完成每一个subordinate要做的工作，unfair的。比如，不能blame a CEO for lacking the skills of typing。要对下属做的事有很好的了解，但不一定都要做。否则，领导就失去了意义，成为了一个全能的工人。omnipotent worker with all kinds of skills.

View1: It is human nature to admire then follow someone who is more competent than themselves.
View2: But a feature of a good leader is to organize people with different specialities together and let them perform as a whole. It is too ideal to expect the leaders to have all the specialities of his subordinates.

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:22

4 9 osyu;anita317; bigjujube; kyo Employees should keep their private lives and personal activities as separate as possible from the workplace.” 9.17 9.18 9.21 9.25

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 11:22

3 B2 蒋特曼; honeydd; spz316 "V1.人活得越长，就给资源造成更大负担，从而降低其他人的生活质量 V2.Althoughmost people wish to live long lives, attempting to significantly extend theaverage human life span would be a mistake. If achieved, this would place anenormous burden on resources, lowering the quality of life for everyone. V3.应该停止延长人们平均寿命的项目，只会增加社会负担。
" SHEET4 9.17 9.18 9.19

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 13:50

2 100 huchen125； zf13646348 If a nation is to ensure its own economic success, it must maintain a highly competitive educational system in which students compete among themselves and against students from other countries. SHEET4 9.18 9.19
AI 狗34
提纲：
延长寿命没错
1。生存是人的本性，活的长更没错，何况并没有一个标准何为生存的长短，凭什么不让继续活下去呢
2。随着科技进步，人们会有办法找到替代能源，从而保护动植物和矿物资源
3。人们想继续生活长久要通过改善环境来实现，因此人们也会对环境做出保护措施
提纲：
论述的方向是不同意作者观点，
第一，寿命增加未必造成资源负担，因为考虑到我们的科技也在进步，用更高的科技可以从有限的资源中生产出更多的商品从而满足人们的需要。

第二生活质量和钱直接关系，和人均资源不是直接管线，因为钱决定了资源的流向。所以西方发达国家人民及时在这样的一个趋势下，生活质量不会受影响
by 阿尔法柔笼

提纲：
1. quality of life不仅只是物质上的还有精神上的
 2. 科技发达了，resources更合理利用了
3. 每个人寿命延长不等于整体人口就多了
by deodar

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 13:51

4 36 estellesha; limoster; fly12404; fenglikang V1.Businesses and other organizations have overemphasized the importance of working as a team. Clearly, in any human group, it is the strong individual, the person with the most commitment and energy, who gets things done. V2.Nowdays,business and other organizations have overemphasized the importance of working as a team.However,it is the strong individual,a person with commitment and energy that gets things done. Discuss to what extent you agree with such perspective. 9.19 9.19 9.16 9.25

犬35
  1 advantage: make students better prepared for the future competition, etc
2 disadvantages: very pressure and stressful
3 a refined educational system is preferred

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 13:51

1 类似20 bbeos Many people complain that we depend too much on computers, however, computers are continually improving our lives. 9.19

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 13:51

2 lcfgtxy;leanncx V1.people are likely to accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated an ability to perform the asme tasks that he or she expects others to perform                                                                            V2.A leader will be accepted only when he demonstrate an ability to perform the tasks that he or she askes others to do. 9.19 9.20
3 23 greenGMATerS; squirnail；    乱世佳人 Schools should be responsible only for teaching academic skills and not for teaching ethical and social values 9.20 9.21 9.25
3 GMAT798;raingirl ;wonderfulwq V1.环境保护的主要责任是个人还是政府    V2.Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.” 9.20 9.20 9.20

作者: myice 时间: 2010-9-27 13:52

1 34 jessexun All citizens should be required to perform a specified amount of public service. Such service would benefit not only the country as a whole but also the individual participants 9.21
1 桑子夏只有那些能够展示自己做事情能力的人才能真正被大众接受为leader. 9.24
1 wsss Many people complain that we depend too much on computers, however, computers are continually improving our lives. 9.24
1 jennischou Due to the changes in technologies and the demands in service industry, employee should take the responsibility of adjusting to the changes. 企業跟政府不需負責 9.25

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