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标题: 9月16日换题库后——GMAT作文新题AI汇总(1-30) [打印本页]

作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:08     标题: 9月16日换题库后——GMAT作文新题AI汇总(1-30)

2                panovation;   nfdsm        "V1 Employers should have the right to keep the employees from engage in 坏习惯, both in workforce or in personal lives.

V2 Employers have the rights to prohibit the unhealthy behaviors of employees, both in the workplace and their personal lives"                9.16        9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:08

1                Dechu        How effectively a student learn depends more on the quality of the other student than the quality of the teachers.                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:09

3        B5        vijo;qizuko;hide23        public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things they do not personally experience.        SHEET3        9.16        9.16        9.17
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:09

本帖最后由 xiongbaobao 于 2010-9-19 16:11 编辑

2                rikkina;tianjinerzhong        The most experienced candidate is usually the best candidate for the leadership position.(一个最有经验的员工往往是领导职位的最佳人选)                9.16        9.16

Main point:   狗4

public figures should avoid expressing opinions in public about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by

On the one hand, normally public figures have many followers who treat the public figures as model, if public figures express themselves in a nonresponsible and superficial way, their followers may act accordingly.

Moreover, public figures are just human being like each of us, they are, in most cases, good at one field. It is unrealistic to expect them to give correct answers to all public questions. It is highly possible they will give non-sense answer to a question they never experienced or heard of.
Admittedly, it is hard to prevent all public figures from doing so since the wide spreading internet, TV programs. The possible way lies in educate public to listen to public figures with caution.
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:10

本帖最后由 xiongbaobao 于 2010-9-19 16:11 编辑

1        5        Jessielynn        All groups and organizations should function as teams in which everyone makes decisions and shares responsibilities and duties. Giving one person central authority and responsibility for a project or task is not an effective way to get work done.        SHEET2        9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:11

1                fly12404        " Business and other organizations are overemphasized on the importance of working as a team。
   the strong individual, a person with      heavy commitment and energy , 是重要的(大概是这个意思)
"                9.16

犬6
 1. everyone should be encouraged to participate. managers should talk to employees from time to time to get their ideas about future strategy.... 对组织怎么怎么好
     2. 如果大家都要负责,这样反而降低性积极性。如果公司董事会成员也要为日常的经营负责,愿意参加的人就少,献计献策的积极性也没那么高
     3. 举通用今年发生的事情为例,说明个人决策并负责的好处。如果不是Ed Whitacre 大权在握,几月前干掉了原CEO,通用至少没那么快可以又还钱又IPO
By  iamduzhe
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:12

1        105        loverwy        "A society is measured more by scientific and artistic achievenments than by business successes.
"        SHEET4        9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:12

1                loveoaple        Celebrities are uniquely qualified to address social problems, because of their high status and access to resources.                9.16

犬8  范文
“The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
It is tempting to concede the speaker’s opinion that achievements in art and science are more significant to the worth of a nation than its “mere” business successes. Still, I disagree with the view because it overlooks the several ways that commercial success supports artistic accomplishment and scientific progress. It also ignores the extent to which commercial success renders a nation more secure, and better able to promote human rights and political stability throughout the world.
First of all, art and science have always depended upon the patronage of successful business. Consider Italy’s powerful banking clan, the Medici family, and their support for artists such as Michelangelo (米开朗基罗[1475-1564,意大利文艺复兴时期成就卓著的科学家,艺术家]) and Raphael. Substantial scientific and artistic support now comes from foundations established by extraordinarily successful business families like the Rockefellers, Gettys, Carnegies and Mellons. In addition to their private-sector foundation funding, successful businesses also pay taxes that are returned to university art and science programs. And, many businesses form partnerships with universities to further scientific discovery and related technological progress. Finally, both art and science are highly successful business enterprises in their own right.
Secondly, the value of a nation is related to its ability to defend itself, and to help promote peace and justice among other nations. A nation is more capable in both regards when its businesses enjoy greater success. For example, the current return of Kosovars to their homeland was facilitated by a cost-intensive military effort that required funding from, among other sources, tax revenues from business. In addition, a wealthy nation can, by means of its trade agreements, use its economic strength to encourage other countries to extend greater human rights to their citizens. Finally, a wealthy nation can depend on an expansive weapons industry in the private sector; and it can fund an effective military to carry out national defense.
In sum, it is simplistic to suppose that achievement in art and science is more important to the value of a nation than the success of its businesses. The latter is essential to national and world security. And, business success is deeply connected to accomplishment in art and science.
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:13

1        2        hyl_0212        “It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.”                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:13

2        15        loveumyangel;     CharleneWang        "Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.”*
*The Internet is a worldwide computer network"        SHEET2        9.16        9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:14

2        45        peggyye;          grands        "(公司最有效的获得profit的途径是保持最高的道德)                          “The most effective way for a businessperson to maximize profits over a long period of time is to follow the highest standards of ethics.”
"        SHEET4        9.16        9.17

犬11
Optional words:
Regulation/ law/ restriction
Limit/confine/.control/ hamper/ inhibit/
View1: adult material on the internet may have terrible affect on children with immature point of view and judgment.  
Evidence: pornographic material. tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, and of how people ought to treat one another.
View2:since Internet has no national boundaries, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort.
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:18

1        115        sueyangyang        “Technology ultimately separates and alienates people more than it serves to bring them together.”                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:18

犬12  思路
反面的例子可以是说如果从最高的道德规范来看有些污染环境的行业根本就不应该存在。但是从企业的长期发展来看以及从社会的福利最大化来看,只要污染控制在一定范围就好。如化工厂只要把排污控制在国家规定的范围就好。
1道德不明确,每个人的标准不一样               2法律立法时符合大多数人的要求明确具体        3时滞可以用提高立法效率来解决         

1. 支持者会认为, 高道德会赢得reputation and trust; 第一, 高道德生产高质量的产品以及service,顾客稳定stable share of the market; 第二, 高道德会让员工满意度提高(公平,平等). 从而attract those applicants with high ability and keep the employees loyal to the company---最终导致高的productivity.            例子:Bayer, one of the largest pharmaceutic companies in the world, announced that the company would cease production of one of its major products, because of the hazardous ingredients it contained. By doing so, the company suffers great loss on profitability, but gains strong public support and understanding, which can contribute to the long-term success of the company.
2. 但在更多的情况下, 高道德也许不equal to maximal profit. 比如,a, 如果把道德放在第一位的话,企业的executive很可能无法执行裁员活动complete the normal administration, such as raising the price, reducing the superabundant staff…  b, 高道德的话,很可能采用最高标准的环保生产——这样很不是cost-effective.   总之,Following such undue concern about ethics, the company may find it impossible to survive in the radical competitive market, let alone to gain large profit.
View1: the definition of highest standards of ethics vary from person to person and time to time. Therefore, it isimpractical to find and then stick to the highest standards of ethics.

View2: the regulations and laws of authorities are more feasible and suitable standards to follow.

View3: while waiting for government regulations may draw back the processes of eliminating the ill actions, we can count on the authorities to speed up the process of refining the laws and regulations.
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:19

1        37        anitasakuragi        “Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:22

1                luke0305        "当下社会的进步,包括 business 和 tech 的进步使人们的生活质量空前地好。
"                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:23

1                wainilz520        国家该不该有机密信息                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:23

本帖最后由 xiongbaobao 于 2010-9-19 16:43 编辑

1        40        mimi17260         “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”                9.16

AI 狗17               
提纲:               
               
1 让步说这是导演/公司的自由把violance的东西加入到电影、歌曲等中来谋取利润               
2 但是流行的东西容易过时,violance的东西也不利外,一直加这种东西人们也会腻,最后不一定能赚到钱               
3 而且,violance的东西会对社会各方面造成不利影响。。。               
总结,用violance的东西也不一定能赚钱,而且还对社会的发展不利,所以不同意。
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:25

1        B10        hzd515976083        Portrayals of violence have proven commercially successful in television programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therefore, those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate violence into their products.        SHEET3        9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:33

1        26        Ivanka囡        Location has traditionally been one of the most important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of location is not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computer communications and others kinds of technology becomes.                9.16

狗18
提纲:
1.艺术可以使人更好地投入到科学技术的研究中.起到一定的促进作用.For example, recent studies of cognitive development show that studying music at an early age can strengthen a child's later grasp of mathematics. And understanding philosophical concepts has helped scients recognize their own presuppositions, and frame their central questions more accurately.
2.从前人前辈的成就和伟大人格中我们可以得到促进和激励更好的投入到工作和学习生活中.
3.单独只有科学技术我们只能找到解决问题的办法。即我只是知道how to do而不知道should we do .... . This is not to say, however, that ... . To the contrary mathematicians cognitive strengthen grasp philosophical philosophy presupposition presumption premise assumption intellectual inspire dominate predominate autonomous autonomy liberal arts 文科 contemporary

1.科技十分重要,没有科学技能的人,很难快速容入工作。难以想象一个缺乏基本电脑知识的人,如何在一个corporation in which most of the daily affairs are dealt with the aid of computer里很好地完成工作!所以,学校有责任培养学生的IT技能。
2.但是,不代表学校应该忽视艺术人文的教育。众所周知,艺术人文起到启迪思想provide people with gracious spirit. 引导人们意识到人性中的固有美德:。。。举例:科学技术是人们生存发展的工具,但同时,如果没有美德,则可能变成危险的武器。比如nuclear weapons; heroin is made by people with standard chemistry knowledge…(with the guide of virtue, science can be the best servant of human; however, on the other hand, without such guide, it can become the most dangerous weapon.
3.false dilemma. The speaker falsely put the school in a dilemma by suggesting the teaching of science and that of arts are mutually exclusive. 完全可以把两者结合起来。

View1: primarily and secondary school, whose main function is to teach general knowledge and more important, to shape healthy personality, should place at least as much attention on the arts and humanities as they do on science and technology
View2: Contrarily, university and college should devoted more time on teaching science and technology as they are becoming more and more essential to our modern society. However, it dose not mean the Arts and humanities is not important and the time devoted to it should be decreased. Universities can increase the teaching hour on science and technology by ways such as employ more professors and open more available classroom to provide more courses at the same time.
View3: science and technology are becoming more and more important, yet, we still can not underestimate the importance of the arts and humanities.
Learning form predecessors’ experience and great personalities can lead to great efforts devoted to work and thus better performance. Science and technology tell us who to do, but humanities tell us what should to .
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:33

1        37        FLOWERHEARTLR        Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:34

2        115        xixixipanda;           CharleneWang        “Technology ultimately separates and alienates people more than it serves to bring them together.”                9.16        9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:34

3        65        littled;跳跳羊;  DorothyHong        "V1.“The rise of multinational corporations is leading to global homogeneity*. Because people everywhere are beginning to want the same products and services, regional differences are rapidly disappearing.
* homogeneity: sameness, similarity                                                         V2.讲的是这个世界正在趋同,那么就不需要在区域上不同的产品了。"                9.16        9.17
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:35

1                LprinceWang;      cuppyan123        "V1最好的老师应该是鼓励学生challenge popular ideas的
V2 The best teacher is the one who expect the students to challenge the popular ideas rather than accept them."                9.16        9.17
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:37

1        60        mirare        “Employers should have no right to obtain information about their employees’ health or other aspects of their personal lives without the employees’ permission.”                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:37

1        111        seraphfeng         “The most effective business leaders are those who maintain the highest ethical standards.”                9.16
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:37

2                yvonney512;       paipai790         Physical activity and sports is as important in a student's academic s education                9.16        9.17
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:38

1        107        车轮圈圈         (经理们分配工作的最好的方式就是把复杂的工作分成简单的部分,这样每个workers都能为工作做出贡献。 )                                      The most effective way for managers to assign work is to divide complex tasks into their simpler component parts. This way, each worker completes a small portion of the task but contributes to the whole.        SHEET5        9.17
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:38

1                bendrift        Constant innovation and change within anorganization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improveit.        SHEET5        9.17

题库107 犬27
"1,分工是个有效的方式
   Work division and assignment is an efficient way to get things done.
   First of all, workers with few highly specific skills are usually cheaper to hire than those with broader education and experience.
Secondly, it is less expensive to train employees in narrow areas.
Finally, strict compartmentalization (n.区分, 划分) of tasks makes it easier for managers to control employees, and, therefore, to control and increase productivity.

Nevertheless, that is not to say, merely dividing work among workers can assure the final accomplishment of the task.
让员工觉得孤立
   Fragmenting work into small units leads to employee alienation(孤立).
Those responsible for only a detailed component of a project can easily lose sight of larger organizational goals and their own importance in achieving them, and then become less committed to their work, and less productive.
In addition, the lack of overall conception may lead to adjusting difficulties.
2,阻碍合作
Moreover, Compartmentalizing tasks can stifle(阻碍) cooperation.   

My view
   Team work is not to simply add one component to another, but to organically conform all components together"
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:40

1        24        必须700加        “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.        SHEET2        9.17

题库A2 犬28
"When it comes to whether continuous innovation and change with an organization are more likely to worsen the organization than to improve it, different people have different opinions due to their respective angles. Weighing the merits and demerits arising from the innovation and change, I should say that I am a proponent of the existence of constant innovation and change within an organization.
To begin with, innovation and appropriate change can make an organization, in most cases, a better one. Not only innovation defined as the introduction of new ideas and methods is playing a decisive role in operations of organizations, but also sometimes even little Change makes sense. There is a good example to describe that a shopping mall that tends to increase its sales extends its business hours to adjust customers’ changing behavior due to the switch of seasons.

In addition, it is a universal truth that change is the principle of universe. Any organization cannot avoid changing exclusively, while all the other organizations are changing. For example, nowadays most of companies establish an electronic system of finance and accounting. It is the standard that all individuals in this circumference should conform. Hence, under this condition, not the convenience of trading with other companies matters, but the fact that without such a standard system, the business cannot go on.

Admittedly, on occasion it seems that change and innovation undermine organizations’ operation. But I believe that the problem is more likely to result from other factors other than the innovation itself. For instance, some managers introduce unsuitable change and innovation, following other companies’ successful myth blindly.

In sum, to maximally harness innovation and to fully prepare for the change of circumference, it is wise to take a positive attitude to constant innovation and change within the organization. Furthermore, the implementation of introduce innovation and change is a net of variables so that we should take a careful consideration into the real reason when the organization suffers problem.
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:41

1                billzhangheng        "V1 People have duty to disobey the laws they consider unjust.
V2 如果人们不喜欢法律就能不遵守
V3 People should not disobey laws even though they consider them unjust."                9.17

犬29
提纲:
1.         每一个政府官员都很难自己做出决策。每一个政令的颁布表面上仿佛是由一个人宣布的,其实背后的程序过程都是十分繁杂的。seperation of the three powers(the legislative, executive and judicial powers) In this work he argued that the three powers a state has are the Legislative, the Executive and the Judicial and that for a state to remain democratic, these powers must be separated and there must be checks and balances to prevent a single group from acquiring control over two or more of them.
任何一个政府官员做出决定都可能受到上司甚至是同事的限制,即使是总统,其实也仅仅是他的领导班子共同商议做出结论,更何况三权分立在保护了民主的同时本身也限制了每个个人甚至是每个group的决策权利以及对国家和社区的影响。
2.         而企业领导往往会有更大的决策权,而他们的决策也更容易被贯彻。在一个经济为中心的国家相应的他们的对社区和国家的影响力也就更大。

1.         Admittedly, 领导人的作用有时不象企业家一样apparent. 因为国家的发展,人们的生活,与企业closely related. 比如GATES,领导了信息产业革命;Rockefeller,控制国家的石油命脉took control of  American oil supply。企业家通过影响企业的行为,从而直观上影响人course of a community.
2.         但是,企业的一切影响is based on its existence, which is permitted by the government. 政府制定各种policy来允许企业的存在,企业家的一切行为需要被政府允许才能产生作用。
3.         Moreover, 影响一个国家,需要强大的power, which can be only generated from absolutely authority. 这样的绝对权力是企业不具备的。Yet even a cursory review of the history reveals substantial evidence that it is the government leader rather than the business leader that can make the pivotal decision when the nation is in crisis. 比如,在经济recession,企业的力量无法使经济好转,revive the economy of the whole nation, 只有政府运用行政措施,制定positive policy to stimulate the companies and thus the economy of the whole nation. 比如Roosevelt. Bill Clinton.  financial policy

1.         Unlike business leader, government power is likely to subject to many more restraints.  Our check-and-balance system, the legislation influence and the voting power are all factors that temper the power of government official to the course of a community or a nation. Moreover, powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold the actual legislative and judicial power by their financial supporting of official activities such as governmental elections.
2.         While take more thorough consideration, the government official is likely to have more direct and broad influence on a community and a nation.
Evidence: various approach to influence other than financial approach
In addition the governmental official have the abilities to regulate commerce,
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:42

1        33        athenelynn        People are likely to accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated an ability to perform the same tasks that he or she expects others to perform        SHEET3        9.17

Q犬31
提纲:
1.       人们不会尊重一个不能完成他要求别人完成的任务自己却不能完成的领导。这是人之常情,人们通常都只会欣赏和尊敬比自己优秀的人,而不喜欢被一个不能完成任务却命令自己去做的人心存敬意。例如克林顿总统当commander-in-chief 的时候,由于众所周知他曾经逃避兵役,很自然的下级军官和士兵都不是很尊重他。
2.       人们不信任一个自己完不成任务却要求别人去完成的人。仍然举克林顿总统的例子。由于他逃兵役被视为没有能力,下级都对他的决策心存怀疑,这也就潜在的导致了执行上的不尽心不尽力。
3.       诚然是否能完成自己交给别人的任务并不是衡量一个leader重要指标。可能领导能力、,组织能力、运筹能力更为重要,但是我们不能忽视人们心理上的看法,尽管它可能并不合理但它确实是存在的。

1.       诚然,如果在其领导的领域内几乎一窍不通,一个领导很难得到下属的信任和支持,会被看作layperson. 比如,人们无法想象一个不具备任何电脑知识的人,该如何领导一个庞大的IT企业,比如MICROSOFT在激烈的市场中竞争。
2.       但是,这是否意味着作为领导,必须要有能力完成每一项他要求下属做的事呢?这个问题,与领导和员工的真正作用有很大关系!首先,领导的职责是制定长期的发展方针,并且保证这个方针的贯彻执行,adhere to their strategic plans不被偏离。组织员工共同合作完成任务。on the other hand, 员工的作用是各司其职,更加具体的specific task.
3.       从以上两种职责不难看出,领导与员工起到significantly different functions,让领导完成每一个subordinate要做的工作,unfair的。比如,不能blame a CEO for lacking the skills of typing。要对下属做的事有很好的了解,但不一定都要做。否则,领导就失去了意义,成为了一个全能的工人。omnipotent worker with all kinds of skills.

View1: It is human nature to admire then follow someone who is more competent than themselves.
View2: But a feature of a good leader is to organize people with different specialities together and let them perform as a whole. It is too ideal to expect the leaders to have all the specialities of his subordinates.
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:42

2        9        osyu;anita317        Employees should keep their private lives and personal activities as separate as possible from the workplace.”                9.17        9.18
作者: xiongbaobao    时间: 2010-9-19 16:43

1                蒋特曼        人活得越长,就给资源造成更大负担,从而降低其他人的生活质量                9.17
作者: sayysong    时间: 2010-9-19 20:07

many  thanks !!
作者: chamcham    时间: 2010-10-21 21:34

thanks  a  lot @!




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