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作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:45     标题: 9月GMAT考试作文AI部分总结

7        107        stan_yu 760; volcanobird; AppleStrudel; silence05 cherryfane derek22604 zhy6364        The most effective way for managers to assign work is to divide complex tasks into their simpler component parts. This way, each worker completes a small portion of the task but contributes to the whole.        见sheet3        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月2日        9月3日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:46

提纲:
1.        每个员工都目标明确因此更有效率
2.        缺乏全局观念也可能出现协调上的困难
3.        好的leader好的分配是前提和保证

case by case.
1.        有些庞大的工程big and complex project,需要人们把工作细分,a, 单独的人没有力量完成,会take much more time,团队之间合作更有利于完成整个任务。b, 每个人可以做自己最擅长的工作。each member can choose the part that she or he are good at. 这样就整体上eliminate the total amount of time to complete the whole task.
2.        但很多工作不适合仅仅literally divide拆分。在要求连贯的coherent reasoning. 各个部分之间close related. 所以,第一,需要整个小组的人进行有效的communication,第二,需要对团队整个collective goal的adequate comprehension,第三,保证这两条的必要条件prerequisite to meet the two needs is 团队合理的人数,不能过多,也不能过少。第四,要有一个team leader,负责指挥和协调工作provide effective guide and lead the team to adhere to the collective goal (common purpose).
phrases:
fragment work into small units; Distinct divisions of labor; stifle creativity; undermine self-motivation and pride in one’s work; collaboration=cooperation;
Of course, unproductive employees can be replaced. But replacement is costly; and high employee turnover is bad for organizational morale.-----用在对员工缺乏效率时的补充,很有用!!

View1: work division and assignment is an efficient way to get things done. However, merely dividing work among workers can not assure the final accomplishment of the task.
Evidence:   fragmenting work into small units leads to employee alienation, Those responsible for only a detailed component of a project can easily lose sight of larger organizational goals and their own importance in achieving them. then become less committed to their work, and less productive. In addition, the lack of overall conception may lead to adjusting difficulties. Moreover, Compartmentalizing tasks can stifle cooperation.   
View2: However, team work is not to simply add one component to another, but to organically conform all components together.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:46

6        类似20        mollymolly 730; 郑晓青;girlwithwings; joey19880204; wangjing726 nyahchen        Many people complain that we depend too much on computers, however, computers are continually improving our lives.                8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月5日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:47

4                 ponyoveronica; gmatethan; jenniferwong gracefighting        How effectively a student learn depends more on the quality of the other student than the quality of the teachers.                8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月1日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:47

5        23        Nicewill; cherryruj 梦想守护者 aries740408 ziluqingqing        Schools should be responsible only for teaching academic skills and not for teaching ethical and social values                8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月3日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:47

4        24        哈哈柚; daier;mikeandy mysky0817        “A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official.        见sheet2        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:47

提纲:
1.         每一个政府官员都很难自己做出决策。每一个政令的颁布表面上仿佛是由一个人宣布的,其实背后的程序过程都是十分繁杂的。seperation of the three powers(the legislative, executive and judicial powers) In this work he argued that the three powers a state has are the Legislative, the Executive and the Judicial and that for a state to remain democratic, these powers must be separated and there must be checks and balances to prevent a single group from acquiring control over two or more of them.
任何一个政府官员做出决定都可能受到上司甚至是同事的限制,即使是总统,其实也仅仅是他的领导班子共同商议做出结论,更何况三权分立在保护了民主的同时本身也限制了每个个人甚至是每个group的决策权利以及对国家和社区的影响。
2.         而企业领导往往会有更大的决策权,而他们的决策也更容易被贯彻。在一个经济为中心的国家相应的他们的对社区和国家的影响力也就更大。
3.         诚然在一个以政治为中心的国家里,企业领导对社区和国家产生影响的机会会较少,但经济是政治的基础,离开经济政治是毫无影响力可言的。此外由于上面所说过的原因政府官员对社区和国家的影响同样不会很大。

1.         Admittedly, 领导人的作用有时不象企业家一样apparent. 因为国家的发展,人们的生活,与企业closely related. 比如GATES,领导了信息产业革命;Rockefeller,控制国家的石油命脉took control of  American oil supply。企业家通过影响企业的行为,从而直观上影响人course of a community.
2.         但是,企业的一切影响is based on its existence, which is permitted by the government. 政府制定各种policy来允许企业的存在,企业家的一切行为需要被政府允许才能产生作用。
3.         Moreover, 影响一个国家,需要强大的power, which can be only generated from absolutely authority. 这样的绝对权力是企业不具备的。Yet even a cursory review of the history reveals substantial evidence that it is the government leader rather than the business leader that can make the pivotal decision when the nation is in crisis. 比如,在经济recession,企业的力量无法使经济好转,revive the economy of the whole nation, 只有政府运用行政措施,制定positive policy to stimulate the companies and thus the economy of the whole nation. 比如Roosevelt. Bill Clinton.  financial policy

1.         Unlike business leader, government power is likely to subject to many more restraints.  Our check-and-balance system, the legislation influence and the voting power are all factors that temper the power of government official to the course of a community or a nation. Moreover, powerful business leaders all too often seem to hold the actual legislative and judicial power by their financial supporting of official activities such as governmental elections.
2.         While take more thorough consideration, the government official is likely to have more direct and broad influence on a community and a nation.
Evidence: various approach to influence other than financial approach
In addition the governmental official have the abilities to regulate commerce,
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:47

8                aioloseros; jack3939889 witcharlotte 囧fi 辰辰1013 horacetangolin 橘子小兰        The most experienced candidate is usually the best candidate for the leadership position.                8-28 前        8-28 前        9月5日        9月6日        9月10日        9月10日        9月10日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:48

2                 nininana joey6        At the fast-paced world, employers can benefit more from energy and new ideas of younger workers than experience and wisdom of older workers.                8-28 前        9月2日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:48

8        65        IvyDC; hvfgrpwk; xiangyanyan sibylove kkjj2222 qingqian sherry5 ranpa        "“The rise of multinational corporations is leading to global homogeneity*. Because people everywhere are beginning to want the same products and services, regional differences are rapidly disappearing.”
* homogeneity: sameness, similarity"                8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8月30日        9月2日        9月7日        9月6日        9月11日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:48

3        34        桐聆 angelazhao2020 laralee        All citizens should be required to perform a specified amount of public service. Such service would benefit not only the country as a whole but also the individual participants        8月高频        8-28 前        9月2日        9月6日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:48

1        31        tatashishi        Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.        见sheet1        8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:48

提纲:
1.         比起专业的公共服务组织,所有的公民都完成一定的公共服务显得比较低效率。因为我们是在一个高度专业化分工十分明晰的社会,放弃专业的公共服务组织而采取强制性的公民义务形式的服务会使得效率十分低下,而且也会让大多数 人不满,毕竟每个人都有自己的职业和爱好。
2.         管理成本的高昂也是该计划难以贯彻的一个原因。这项决定潜在上要求了要有人监督每个公民是否履行了自己的义务,也要有人给每个公民分配任务.
3.         诚然就象作者所说的那样确实会从整体上给国家带来一定的好处,同时给每个参与的人提供和更多人交流等机会,但是在权衡利弊之后尤其是在和专业化组织对比之后还是得不偿失的be not worth the candle mandatory compulsory ...be weighed against ...
1.         对于国家和社会的好处:首先,强制性mandatory social work可以增加人力资源——因为social work的wage比较低,所以在非强制的情况下,只有少数人愿意参加,这样导致了人员的不足;广泛的参与extensive participation可以引起大家的重视——激发人们更加爱护公共设施,从而降低整个expense on the maintaining. 因为公共设施becomes a aggregation of the hard work of all the citizens. 人们不付出努力,就不会珍惜
2.         对参与者的好处: The principal thing in this world is to keep one’s soul aloft.  Flaubert(the great novelist)公共服务可以使人们更加意识到自己的社会责任感duty, 也同时有益于平时的工作; 可以增加人与人的交流, 在完全没有压力的环境下, 心灵得到放松.
3.         当然, 完全强制有可能引起stimulate抵触emotion of repellence, 也要注意方法,同时不要影响正常的工作.
View1: public service, a main approach to show social responsibilities, benefits both the county and the participants.
View2: When becomes a burden and stress to the participants, public service harm not only individual performers but also entire society. Cost of enforcement, reduction of efficiency , increase of abhorrence.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:49

4        112         rudder26 710; csdianna; 遗失的紫水晶 januarylzy        Because of recent advancements in business and technology, the overall quality of life in most societies has never been better than at the present time        见shee4        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:49

提纲:
1物质生活更丰富,生活更便利,不受天灾威胁
2节奏太快,远离自然
3进步是双刃剑要好好利用double-edged sword
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:49

10        87        hahaafeng; amanda621; sailing0831; serene301 kkccpp 阳光小捷子 lpilikeit maomaows beijing111        As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.        见sheet5        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        8月30日        8月30日        9月5日        9月5日        9月6日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:49

提纲:
1.         The government should be responsible for the adjustment of the workers. If all the citizens should be responsible for themselves, there is no use for the government to exist.
2.         The government should also force the business to involve in the project. Because the government itself is incapable of doing so without concrete knowledge of each certain industry. In the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
3.         Admittedly, the workers should not rely on others to help them to adjust to varying situations. They themselves should adapt their skills and knowledge to the change of the industry and of the society.

1.         个人确实应该首先take the chief responsibility of their job obsolescence. 因为对自己的生活负责的人,首先是自己。现在的社会也提供了机会:很多学校提供短期的培训,人们可以参加保持自己keep up with the changes of the technologies and new direction of businesses。第二,只有个人采取主动,才能从根本上解决问题。否则merely rely on the help coming from government or business,人们会变得消极become passive and lose enterprise. 长期以来,对整个社会都有negative impact on the further development of one society.
2.         但是,这不是说企业不应该负责。after all, 是企业作出了创新和改变,并且造成了这些改变——并且造成了job obsolescence。应该为这些负责任。比如,为员工提供opportunity of training for the new technique…,这样也可以节约重新培训totally new employee的cost。
3.         Moreover, 政府也应该采取一些行动。政府作为一个社会的管理者supervisor,有责任保证全社会的well being. 应该帮助个人完成适应adjustment. 可以通过提供一些insurance for unemployment, advice for the occupational choice, necessary information of the new trend of business…

Thesis sentence: While individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so
View1: l agree that individuals must assume primary responsibility for adjusting to job obsolescence, especially since our educational system has been preparing us for it
View2: However, industry should bear some of the responsibility as well. It is industry, after all, that determines the particular directions technological progress and subsequent social change will take. Moreover in the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
View3:
Government should also assume some of the responsibility, since it is partly government money that fuels technological progress in industry. Moreover, government should help because it can help—for example, by ensuring that grants and federally insured student loans are available to those who must retool in order to find new work. Government can also help by observing and recording trends in worker displacement and in job opportunities, and by providing this information to individuals so that they can make prudent decisions about their own further education and job searches.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:49

2        100        222008 judia2010        If a nation is to ensure its own economic success, it must maintain a highly competitive educational system in which students compete among themselves and against students from other countries.         见sheet6        8-28 前        9月1日        9月10日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:50

提纲:
1.         1 advantage: make students better prepared for the future competition, etc.
2.         2 disadvantages: very pressure and stressful
3.         3 a refined educational system is preferred
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:50

9                DCdaisy; venus2elva sanguine818 helloiamcherry sweetray 文碧wenbi DavisLX lily28        "V1 People have duty to disobey the laws they consider unjust.
V2 如果人们不喜欢法律就能不遵守
V3 People should not disobey laws even though they consider them unjust."        见sheet15        8-28 前        8-28 前        8月31日        9月3日        9月3日        9月6日        9月8日        9月12日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:50

9                DCdaisy; venus2elva sanguine818 helloiamcherry sweetray 文碧wenbi DavisLX lily28        "V1 People have duty to disobey the laws they consider unjust.
V2 如果人们不喜欢法律就能不遵守
V3 People should not disobey laws even though they consider them unjust."        见sheet15        8-28 前        8-28 前        8月31日        9月3日        9月3日        9月6日        9月8日        9月12日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:50

 1. everyone should be encouraged to participate. managers should talk to employees from time to time to get their ideas about future strategy.... 对组织怎么怎么好
     2. 如果大家都要负责,这样反而降低性积极性。如果公司董事会成员也要为日常的经营负责,愿意参加的人就少,献计献策的积极性也没那么高
     3. 举通用今年发生的事情为例,说明个人决策并负责的好处。如果不是Ed Whitacre 大权在握,几月前干掉了原CEO,通用至少没那么快可以又还钱又IPO

By  iamduzhe



犬15
狗主人请大家忽略下面他那个变成argument的思路吧:
1. 套用了fallacy of either or, 作者说要不obey 要不 disobey 其实还有在两者中间的区域. 不一定看不惯一个法律就一定要去违法, 还可以不合作嘛.
2. 法律是collective negotiation的结果, 如果你违法了 可能会对他人造成影响.  这样就不好了. 而且有可能你自己还要受罚 更不好了...(~.~ 不知道在写什么...)
3. 看不惯法律有多种途径表达. 不一定要disobey law 可以去选总统 把law干掉. 差不多就这样.

PS.AI犬里那个象issue的argument思路也出自同一位狗主,杯具哇. 不过其实只要都言之成理也是不太要紧的.                 BY Lucymouse
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:50

犬28
不对,应该迅速行动。
论点一:随着科技和资本的快速扩散,各公司的产品越来越难以被普通消费者区分,因此公司的reputation尤其重要。消费者看来,environmentally friendly = responsible company = trustable products。
论点二:政府机构一般都比较官僚,制定regulations需要很久,如果公司不迅速改进,有可能被竞争对手抢了先。让步:不停地改进当然也会损伤公司,这就要看direcotr的判断能力了
By 以后再说
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:51

5                Eshael; jethrowen daphne922 lyrahsz        "V1 Employers should have the right to keep the employees from engage in 坏习惯, both in workforce or in personal lives.

V2 Employers have the rights to prohibit the unhealthy behaviors of employees, both in the workplace and their personal lives"                8-28 前        8-28 前        9月2日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:51

2        105        kittymiao3; ssdd         The value of any nation should be measured more by its scientific and artistic achievements than by its business successes.        见sheet7        8-28 前        8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:51

提纲:     
我记得在新东方出的那本北美作文书里有这个范文。具体的不太记得了,但是作者是同意这个观点的,大致是
1. 商业带来经济的发展,是各种国际竞争的基础
2. 重点讲了国防需要钱,需要经济,进而需要商业。
我觉得还可以说科学和艺术经常都 是为商业服务的吧~
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:51

5        33        pattern 深水流年 ivygmat 紫罗兰 rectina1011        People are likely to accept as a leader only someone who has demonstrated an ability to perform the same tasks that he or she expects others to perform        见sheet8        8-28 前        8-28 前        8月30日        8月31日        9月1日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:51

提纲:
1.       人们不会尊重一个不能完成他要求别人完成的任务自己却不能完成的领导。这是人之常情,人们通常都只会欣赏和尊敬比自己优秀的人,而不喜欢被一个不能完成任务却命令自己去做的人心存敬意。例如克林顿总统当commander-in-chief 的时候,由于众所周知他曾经逃避兵役,很自然的下级军官和士兵都不是很尊重他。
2.       人们不信任一个自己完不成任务却要求别人去完成的人。仍然举克林顿总统的例子。由于他逃兵役被视为没有能力,下级都对他的决策心存怀疑,这也就潜在的导致了执行上的不尽心不尽力。
3.       诚然是否能完成自己交给别人的任务并不是衡量一个leader重要指标。可能领导能力、,组织能力、运筹能力更为重要,但是我们不能忽视人们心理上的看法,尽管它可能并不合理但它确实是存在的。

1.       诚然,如果在其领导的领域内几乎一窍不通,一个领导很难得到下属的信任和支持,会被看作layperson. 比如,人们无法想象一个不具备任何电脑知识的人,该如何领导一个庞大的IT企业,比如MICROSOFT在激烈的市场中竞争。
2.       但是,这是否意味着作为领导,必须要有能力完成每一项他要求下属做的事呢?这个问题,与领导和员工的真正作用有很大关系!首先,领导的职责是制定长期的发展方针,并且保证这个方针的贯彻执行,adhere to their strategic plans不被偏离。组织员工共同合作完成任务。on the other hand, 员工的作用是各司其职,更加具体的specific task.
3.       从以上两种职责不难看出,领导与员工起到significantly different functions,让领导完成每一个subordinate要做的工作,unfair的。比如,不能blame a CEO for lacking the skills of typing。要对下属做的事有很好的了解,但不一定都要做。否则,领导就失去了意义,成为了一个全能的工人。omnipotent worker with all kinds of skills.

View1: It is human nature to admire then follow someone who is more competent than themselves.
View2: But a feature of a good leader is to organize people with different specialities together and let them perform as a whole. It is too ideal to expect the leaders to have all the specialities of his subordinates.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

4        68         likesunny; elaine_yzz fangpyj8906 摩诘        Since the physical work environment affects employee productivity and morale, the employees themselves should have the right to decide how their workplace is designed.        见sheet9        8-28 前        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月11日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

提纲:
1. brings creativity and coziness
2. makes colleagues more closely and companionate
3. Admittedly, some companies such as consulting/consultant? company must avoid too much decoration.
However, no matter the employee or the employer, as for the environment is considered, compromise should be made from time to time.

View1:work character have great influence on the design of workplace.
Evidence: consulting company must avoid too much decoration in order to appear professionally and dependably. To some creative work such as AD agency and fashion design, the decorating of workplace is important not only for simulating inspirations but also for showing creative abilities.
View2: also, the designment of workplace should be compromise to company culture.
Evidence: Consider the influence it has done to co-workers and the harmony in work place.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

1                kenhu        环境保护是独立还是全球合作                8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

3                chenys1990; JIAXIN1208 追命brian        "V1最好的老师应该是鼓励学生challenge popular ideas的
V2 The best teacher is the one who expect the students to challenge the popular ideas rather than accept them.
"                8-28 前        8-28 前        9月1日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

4        26        llacat; LIURAN1988 lyhangwa 漏网之鱼         Location has traditionally been one of the most important determinants of a business’s success. The importance of location is not likely to change, no matter how advanced the development of computer communications and others kinds of technology becomes.        sheet15        8-28 前        8-28 前        9月7日        9月11日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

 1. everyone should be encouraged to participate. managers should talk to employees from time to time to get their ideas about future strategy.... 对组织怎么怎么好
     2. 如果大家都要负责,这样反而降低性积极性。如果公司董事会成员也要为日常的经营负责,愿意参加的人就少,献计献策的积极性也没那么高
     3. 举通用今年发生的事情为例,说明个人决策并负责的好处。如果不是Ed Whitacre 大权在握,几月前干掉了原CEO,通用至少没那么快可以又还钱又IPO

By  iamduzhe



犬15
狗主人请大家忽略下面他那个变成argument的思路吧:
1. 套用了fallacy of either or, 作者说要不obey 要不 disobey 其实还有在两者中间的区域. 不一定看不惯一个法律就一定要去违法, 还可以不合作嘛.
2. 法律是collective negotiation的结果, 如果你违法了 可能会对他人造成影响.  这样就不好了. 而且有可能你自己还要受罚 更不好了...(~.~ 不知道在写什么...)
3. 看不惯法律有多种途径表达. 不一定要disobey law 可以去选总统 把law干掉. 差不多就这样.

PS.AI犬里那个象issue的argument思路也出自同一位狗主,杯具哇. 不过其实只要都言之成理也是不太要紧的.                 BY Lucymouse
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:52

犬28
不对,应该迅速行动。
论点一:随着科技和资本的快速扩散,各公司的产品越来越难以被普通消费者区分,因此公司的reputation尤其重要。消费者看来,environmentally friendly = responsible company = trustable products。
论点二:政府机构一般都比较官僚,制定regulations需要很久,如果公司不迅速改进,有可能被竞争对手抢了先。让步:不停地改进当然也会损伤公司,这就要看direcotr的判断能力了
By 以后再说
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:53

1                theozhang        公众人物不要乱说一些自己也没经历过的事情。                8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:53

2        B10         wy007 jeje1900        Portrayals of violence have proven commercially successful in television programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therefore, those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate violence into their products.        见sheet10        8-28 前        8月31日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:53

AI 狗24
提纲:

1 让步说这是导演/公司的自由把violance的东西加入到电影、歌曲等中来谋取利润
2 但是流行的东西容易过时,violance的东西也不利外,一直加这种东西人们也会腻,最后不一定能赚到钱
3 而且,violance的东西会对社会各方面造成不利影响。。。
总结,用violance的东西也不一定能赚钱,而且还对社会的发展不利,所以不同意。


AI 狗25
提纲:
延长寿命没错
1。生存是人的本性,活的长更没错,何况并没有一个标准何为生存的长短,凭什么不让继续活下去呢
2。随着科技进步,人们会有办法找到替代能源,从而保护动植物和矿物资源
3。人们想继续生活长久要通过改善环境来实现,因此人们也会对环境做出保护措施
提纲:
论述的方向是不同意作者观点,
第一,寿命增加未必造成资源负担,因为考虑到我们的科技也在进步,用更高的科技可以从有限的资源中生产出更多的商品从而满足人们的需要。

第二生活质量和钱直接关系,和人均资源不是直接管线,因为钱决定了资源的流向。所以西方发达国家人民及时在这样的一个趋势下,生活质量不会受影响
by 阿尔法柔笼

提纲:
1. quality of life不仅只是物质上的还有精神上的
 2. 科技发达了,resources更合理利用了
3. 每个人寿命延长不等于整体人口就多了
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:53

7        B2        gracetribe; euphoriaK miracle 76 阿尔法柔笼 MBAking45 maomao123965 deodar        Although most people wish to live long lives, attempting to significantly extend the average human life span would be a mistake. If achieved, this would place an enormous burden on resources, lowering the quality of life for everyone.        见sheet10更新        8-28 前        8-28 前        8月31日        9月7日        9月10日        9月12日        9月11日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:53

AI 狗24
提纲:

1 让步说这是导演/公司的自由把violance的东西加入到电影、歌曲等中来谋取利润
2 但是流行的东西容易过时,violance的东西也不利外,一直加这种东西人们也会腻,最后不一定能赚到钱
3 而且,violance的东西会对社会各方面造成不利影响。。。
总结,用violance的东西也不一定能赚钱,而且还对社会的发展不利,所以不同意。


AI 狗25
提纲:
延长寿命没错
1。生存是人的本性,活的长更没错,何况并没有一个标准何为生存的长短,凭什么不让继续活下去呢
2。随着科技进步,人们会有办法找到替代能源,从而保护动植物和矿物资源
3。人们想继续生活长久要通过改善环境来实现,因此人们也会对环境做出保护措施
提纲:
论述的方向是不同意作者观点,
第一,寿命增加未必造成资源负担,因为考虑到我们的科技也在进步,用更高的科技可以从有限的资源中生产出更多的商品从而满足人们的需要。

第二生活质量和钱直接关系,和人均资源不是直接管线,因为钱决定了资源的流向。所以西方发达国家人民及时在这样的一个趋势下,生活质量不会受影响
by 阿尔法柔笼

提纲:
1. quality of life不仅只是物质上的还有精神上的
 2. 科技发达了,resources更合理利用了
3. 每个人寿命延长不等于整体人口就多了
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:54

4        15        imwangpeina  daisyyulan doogypoo mousehyl777        "Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.”*
*The Internet is a worldwide computer network
"        见sheet11        8-28 前        8月30日        9月6日        9月11日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:54

提纲:
The issue here is whether an international effort to regulate children's access to adult material on the Internet is worthwhile. In my view, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort. I base this view on the universality and importance of the interest in protecting children from harm, and on the inherently global nature of the problem.
    Adults everywhere have a serious interest in limiting children's access to pornographic material. Pornographic material tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, of themselves as sexual beings, and of how people ought to treat one another. Particularly in the case of domination and child pornography, the messages children receive from pornographic material cannot contribute in a healthy way to their emerging sexuality. Given this important interest that knows no cultural bounds, we should regulate children's access to sexually explicit material on the internet.
    国际合作在这中间十分必要.因为这种犯罪的遏止如同当年控制臭氧空洞(ozone depletion)的元凶PRIME CRIMINAL(CFC)时候一样单独靠一个国家的力量这种污染是无法遏止的.
    诚然,会遇到很大的政治制约(POLITICAL HURDLE)

1.       pornographic material has seriously negative effect on children-misleading their sense of sex, of the normal relationships between people, and of themselves as sexual beings. 儿童的好奇心以及缺乏正确的认识,are vulnerable to the bad influence of such adults materials,从而distract their concentration from study to those distorted notions. 人们有责任和义务帮助孩子,protect them from being hurt and influenced by such materials.
2.       However, 国家范围内的regulations lose their previous effectiveness because of the development of internet. Just as the companies which contaminate the natural environment move to other countries after being punished, so the company offering pornographic materials on line can move to other parts of the world to avoid punishment. 所以,国家联合起来,非常有必要。
可以通过象环保那样的联合的和约。
3.       Admittedly, 有困难,与甚至敌对的国家hostile  但是不能放弃努力。


Optional words:
Regulation/ law/ restriction
Limit/confine/.control/ hamper/ inhibit/
Thesis sentence:
View1: adult material on the internet may have terrible affect on children with immature point of view and judgment.  
Evidence: pornographic material. tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, and of how people ought to treat one another.
View2:since Internet has no national boundaries, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:54

1        45        kalinda        The most effective way for a businessperson to maximize profits over a long period of time is to follow the highest standards of ethics.”        见sheet12        8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:55

提纲:
反面的例子可以是说如果从最高的道德规范来看有些污染环境的行业根本就不应该存在。但是从企业的长期发展来看以及从社会的福利最大化来看,只要污染控制在一定范围就好。如化工厂只要把排污控制在国家规定的范围就好。
1.         道德不明确,每个人的标准不一样
2.         法律立法时符合大多数人的要求明确具体
3.         时滞可以用提高立法效率来解决

1.         支持者会认为, 高道德会赢得reputation and trust; 第一, 高道德生产高质量的产品以及service,顾客稳定stable share of the market; 第二, 高道德会让员工满意度提高(公平,平等). 从而attract those applicants with high ability and keep the employees loyal to the company---最终导致高的productivity.
例子:Bayer, one of the largest pharmaceutic companies in the world, announced that the company would cease production of one of its major products, because of the hazardous ingredients it contained. By doing so, the company suffers great loss on profitability, but gains strong public support and understanding, which can contribute to the long-term success of the company.
2.         但在更多的情况下, 高道德也许不equal to maximal profit. 比如,a, 如果把道德放在第一位的话,企业的executive很可能无法执行裁员活动complete the normal administration, such as raising the price, reducing the superabundant staff…  b, 高道德的话,很可能采用最高标准的环保生产——这样很不是cost-effective.   总之,Following such undue concern about ethics, the company may find it impossible to survive in the radical competitive market, let alone to gain large profit.

View1: the definition of highest standards of ethics vary from person to person and time to time. Therefore, it is impractical to find and then stick to the highest standards of ethics.
View2: the regulations and laws of authorities are more feasible and suitable standards to follow.
View3: while waiting for government regulations may draw back the processes of eliminating the ill actions, we can count on the authorities to speed up the process of refining the laws and regulations.
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:55

2        42        lukeshi88 以后再说        Scientists are continually redefining the standards for what is beneficial or harmful to the environment. Since these standards keep shifting, companies should resist changing their products and processes in response to each new recommendation until those recommendations become government regulations.        9-11更新见sheet15        8-28 前        9月11日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:55

 1. everyone should be encouraged to participate. managers should talk to employees from time to time to get their ideas about future strategy.... 对组织怎么怎么好
     2. 如果大家都要负责,这样反而降低性积极性。如果公司董事会成员也要为日常的经营负责,愿意参加的人就少,献计献策的积极性也没那么高
     3. 举通用今年发生的事情为例,说明个人决策并负责的好处。如果不是Ed Whitacre 大权在握,几月前干掉了原CEO,通用至少没那么快可以又还钱又IPO

By  iamduzhe



犬15
狗主人请大家忽略下面他那个变成argument的思路吧:
1. 套用了fallacy of either or, 作者说要不obey 要不 disobey 其实还有在两者中间的区域. 不一定看不惯一个法律就一定要去违法, 还可以不合作嘛.
2. 法律是collective negotiation的结果, 如果你违法了 可能会对他人造成影响.  这样就不好了. 而且有可能你自己还要受罚 更不好了...(~.~ 不知道在写什么...)
3. 看不惯法律有多种途径表达. 不一定要disobey law 可以去选总统 把law干掉. 差不多就这样.

PS.AI犬里那个象issue的argument思路也出自同一位狗主,杯具哇. 不过其实只要都言之成理也是不太要紧的.                 BY Lucymouse
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:55

犬28
不对,应该迅速行动。
论点一:随着科技和资本的快速扩散,各公司的产品越来越难以被普通消费者区分,因此公司的reputation尤其重要。消费者看来,environmentally friendly = responsible company = trustable products。
论点二:政府机构一般都比较官僚,制定regulations需要很久,如果公司不迅速改进,有可能被竞争对手抢了先。让步:不停地改进当然也会损伤公司,这就要看direcotr的判断能力了
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:55

4                宋宋 stepdiao satolason13 热污染物2        "For the sake of national security, the governments should have the access to the library checkout records and Internet activity history of their citizens.
为了保护国家安全,政府可以对任何想保密的消息进行保密。
(考古)To preserve national security, the governments should be authorized to keep secret the information as they wish.
"                8-28 前        8月28日        9月8日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:56

4        5         rainow88 iamduzhe chenping0123 阿彻        All groups and organizations should function as teams in which everyone makes decisions and shares responsibilities and duties. Giving one person central authority and responsibility for a project or task is not an effective way to get work done.        sheet15        8-28 前        9月2日        9月7日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:56

 1. everyone should be encouraged to participate. managers should talk to employees from time to time to get their ideas about future strategy.... 对组织怎么怎么好
     2. 如果大家都要负责,这样反而降低性积极性。如果公司董事会成员也要为日常的经营负责,愿意参加的人就少,献计献策的积极性也没那么高
     3. 举通用今年发生的事情为例,说明个人决策并负责的好处。如果不是Ed Whitacre 大权在握,几月前干掉了原CEO,通用至少没那么快可以又还钱又IPO

By  iamduzhe



犬15
狗主人请大家忽略下面他那个变成argument的思路吧:
1. 套用了fallacy of either or, 作者说要不obey 要不 disobey 其实还有在两者中间的区域. 不一定看不惯一个法律就一定要去违法, 还可以不合作嘛.
2. 法律是collective negotiation的结果, 如果你违法了 可能会对他人造成影响.  这样就不好了. 而且有可能你自己还要受罚 更不好了...(~.~ 不知道在写什么...)
3. 看不惯法律有多种途径表达. 不一定要disobey law 可以去选总统 把law干掉. 差不多就这样.

PS.AI犬里那个象issue的argument思路也出自同一位狗主,杯具哇. 不过其实只要都言之成理也是不太要紧的.                 BY Lucymouse
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:56

3        37        wendy米 梦游中的宝贝 zengpeng999        “Since science and technology are becoming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.        见sheet13        8-28 前        8月30日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:56

提纲:
1.艺术可以使人更好地投入到科学技术的研究中.起到一定的促进作用.For example, recent studies of cognitive development show that studying music at an early age can strengthen a child's later grasp of mathematics. And understanding philosophical concepts has helped scients recognize their own presuppositions, and frame their central questions more accurately.
2.从前人前辈的成就和伟大人格中我们可以得到促进和激励更好的投入到工作和学习生活中.
3.单独只有科学技术我们只能找到解决问题的办法。即我只是知道how to do而不知道should we do .... . This is not to say, however, that ... . To the contrary mathematicians cognitive strengthen grasp philosophical philosophy presupposition presumption premise assumption intellectual inspire dominate predominate autonomous autonomy liberal arts 文科 contemporary

1.科技十分重要,没有科学技能的人,很难快速容入工作。难以想象一个缺乏基本电脑知识的人,如何在一个corporation in which most of the daily affairs are dealt with the aid of computer里很好地完成工作!所以,学校有责任培养学生的IT技能。
2.但是,不代表学校应该忽视艺术人文的教育。众所周知,艺术人文起到启迪思想provide people with gracious spirit. 引导人们意识到人性中的固有美德:。。。举例:科学技术是人们生存发展的工具,但同时,如果没有美德,则可能变成危险的武器。比如nuclear weapons; heroin is made by people with standard chemistry knowledge…(with the guide of virtue, science can be the best servant of human; however, on the other hand, without such guide, it can become the most dangerous weapon.
3.false dilemma. The speaker falsely put the school in a dilemma by suggesting the teaching of science and that of arts are mutually exclusive. 完全可以把两者结合起来。

View1: primarily and secondary school, whose main function is to teach general knowledge and more important, to shape healthy personality, should place at least as much attention on the arts and humanities as they do on science and technology
View2: Contrarily, university and college should devoted more time on teaching science and technology as they are becoming more and more essential to our modern society. However, it dose not mean the Arts and humanities is not important and the time devoted to it should be decreased. Universities can increase the teaching hour on science and technology by ways such as employ more professors and open more available classroom to provide more courses at the same time.
View3: science and technology are becoming more and more important, yet, we still can not underestimate the importance of the arts and humanities.
Learning form predecessors’ experience and great personalities can lead to great efforts devoted to work and thus better performance. Science and technology tell us who to do, but humanities tell us what should to .
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:56

1                hikarugaara        group的重要性被overstrengthen,leader才是decisive                8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:57

3        13        Bluebird1011 rechel19 jassica6097        “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”                8-28 前        9月6日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:57

5                koberoy amychina12 疯子拉拉 serrick 莲宝        Constant innovation and change within anorganization are as likely to damage the organization as they are to improveit.                8-28 前        9月1日        9月4日        9月7日        9月9日
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:57

1                 透明草        in order to preserve national sercuirty, government should be keep secerect as they wish.                8-28 前
作者: myice    时间: 2010-9-13 22:57

1        B5        金毛大男孩        public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things they do not personally experience.                8-28 前
作者: zhaoyiqing    时间: 2010-9-16 20:21

many  thanks !!!!
作者: napoleon8424    时间: 2010-9-18 20:38

many  thanks !!
作者: songxuebest    时间: 2010-10-9 20:55

many  thansk @222
作者: xiexiang    时间: 2010-10-11 21:06

many  thanks !!!




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