标题: 新prep2-230 [打印本页]
作者: parispings 时间: 2010-9-6 07:04 标题: 新prep2-230
At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip.
A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as a decline in sales for
D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of
E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for
D is correct. 请问“主句，介词+代词+名词"是什么结构？后面有谓语的省略么?
作者: EGHJUYMN 时间: 2010-9-6 21:03
倒装形式的独立主格结构
实际上是the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of the company’s powerful microprocessor chip among them,倒装可以避免头重脚轻
作者: sbjqbS 时间: 2010-9-7 06:34
请问B为什么错呢？是因为which只可就近指代company而不可指代challenges吗？谢谢~
作者: gmatmba 时间: 2010-9-8 06:46
B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of
includes单三，使which不能指代复数名词challenges
作者: zhangluE 时间: 2010-9-8 20:42
D 难道不是犯了双重所有格的错误么？
作者: stucashS 时间: 2010-9-9 06:49
A错哪里呢？
作者: 卮言浅夏 时间: 2010-9-10 06:42
A: including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for
including是介词，among也是介词，这里的两个介词连用错。。
没有sale for，只有sale of或是for sale
作者: sbjqbS 时间: 2010-9-11 07:49
including 和 among 是不是语意重复了啊
作者: zongzeng90 时间: 2010-9-11 21:06
倒装形式的独立主格结构
实际上是the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement s ...
EGHJUYMN 发表于 2010-9-6 21:03 
顶！火眼金星啊！
"sales for" is unidiomatic.
"declining sales of" and "decline in sales of" are both correct, but PARALLELISM requires the latter.
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