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作者: aster2009    时间: 2009-7-29 07:26     标题: 新prep1-172

172 Introduced by Italian merchants resident in London during the sixteenth century, in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being ship owners, overseas merchants, or professional moneylenders.

A. in England life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically being

B. in England life insurance had remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

C. until the end of the seventeenth century life insurance in England had remained a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically

D. life insurance in England remained until the end of the seventeenth century a specialized contract between individual underwriters and their clients, typically

E. life insurance remained until the end of the seventeenth century in England a specialized contract between individual underwriters with their clients, who typically were

答案选哪个?为什么,谢谢。


作者: gmataren    时间: 2009-7-29 21:38

I go to D.

A "being"结构置于句末,累赘,别扭且没有必要。可以用 同位语 或 定语从句取代。
   In England放在句首,充当另一个状语,与"introduced by..."形成对主语 life insurance的两重修饰,似乎不好。

B  between...with属于 unidiomatic的用法。
   had remained改变原句时态。In England问题同上。

C  “Until...”状语提前,主句确不以倒装形式出现,错误。“Until"与"Introduced by"构成双重修饰,似乎不好。

D  没问题、

E  between....with结构搭配错误,同B


作者: aster2009    时间: 2009-7-30 06:45

谢谢
作者: mikecater    时间: 2009-7-30 22:03

看到INTRODUCED BY... (该段语为逻辑主语的修饰和补充说明)

直接找逗号后面的第一个词看是不是逻辑主语,可以去掉A,B,C

根据BETWEEN ...AND... 固定搭配,去掉E


作者: liudi    时间: 2009-8-2 16:33

这题应该选D 我的做法是:

看到逗号前面,直接找逻辑主语,看了一下貌似都是life insurance,但是我记得GWD上也有这样的例子,gmac偏好简洁明了,前面已经状语了,最好开门见山,所以我在D和E中选择。E当中between   with是一个常见的错误搭配,所以选D

如果不放心再看看其他选项:

A being放在那边,也没有看出句子有什么特殊需要,所以罗嗦,不对

B,又是一个between with 排除

C 改动太大,我做的时候不确定是不是需要倒装,看了2楼的解释,才知道原来需要倒装。


作者: leslieliu    时间: 2009-8-3 22:09

A:Being不对
B&C:时态不对
E:Who were可以省略。


所以D.






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