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作者: 乱草花儿    时间: 2009-5-20 07:16     标题: GWD17-Q14:

GWD17-Q14:

Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

 

A.      Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

 

B.       Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

 

C.      The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

 

D.      Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete

 

E.       Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies


答案给的A

想知道B怎么错的,请高手指点一二

谢谢


作者: BruceNornia    时间: 2009-5-20 12:51

B的问题 只说大的

 

industries that are more established,应该用the more established industries来替换,这里用分词做定语比用限定定语从句要准确。

as competing companies one day may be ...这里的one day作为状语修饰may be 意思是: 就好像 (一直在竞争)的公司 之后有一天可能成为合作伙伴

而as companies that compete oneday may be ...这里的oneday作为状语修饰compete 意思是:就好像某一天还在竞争的公司 之后可能变成或做伙伴。

 

后面那个分句里 A比B准确


作者: bigmouser    时间: 2009-5-20 21:15

B改了原意&意思很怪
原意是: companies that competes one day可能下一天会变成partner
B的意思是: 現在正在competing中的公司有一天可(one day)能下一天(the next (day))会变成partner

作者: berylgirls    时间: 2009-5-22 20:59

同楼上,one day和the next都是状语.如果选b的话,one day就不能像a答案那样修饰compete,只能修饰may be,这样就造成may be partner同时是one day和the next.
作者: 乱草花儿    时间: 2009-5-23 21:05

哦,我好象明白了

还有一点我想问一下,是不是although连接的前后两个句子比较强调主句,而whereas连接

的句子是平行关系的?


作者: ecsniffers    时间: 2009-5-24 19:26

whereas有一點點比較的意思




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