GWD-12-Q20:

Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

A.      Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established

B.       The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established

C.      The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established

D.      Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established

E.       Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing

答案是A，我的问题是D错在哪里？是Approved... 与making...并列没有用and连接么？但是making引导的状语是对Approved...的修饰，相当结果状语啊。是不是错在把主要成分变成修饰成分？

Approved短语和making短语中间应该有个and

如果说每个状语从句都像喘一口气的话， 主语绝对不会再喘两口气后才出现，像D选项。

也不会在主语和谓语之间用定语从句喘两口气，像B选项

哈哈~

很神奇很强大的解释！