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Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust. A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.

答案给的是c, 但是我觉得A最合适，因为从逻辑上讲其他几个都是water rise into the atmosephere, 不符合逻辑，只有evaperation rise into atmosphere 才合适

偶选C. 因为warmed和ocean water逻辑没错。

ocean water evaporates, rises......, and condenses.........三个连冠动作 to form clouds. 清晰明了。

1）而A, clouds are formed 首先不好。

2）water that is warm又犯GMAT大忌。

3）另condensing 在此只能理解为伴随，但condensing 的动作发出者应该是 ocean water 而非clouds，此为三错。

4）应用ocean water 足够了， 无须 oceans' water.

综上所述，A 坚决批判。