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作者: wretdgdh    时间: 2004-12-9 07:15     标题: [请教]

OG-15中的一个修饰问题

15. In his research paper, Dr. Frosh, medical director of the Payne Whitney Clinic, distinguishes mood swings. which may be violent without their being grounded in mental disease, from genuine manic-depressive psychosis.

(A) mood swings, which may be violent without their being grounded in mental disease, from genuine manic-depressive psychosis

(B) mood swings, perhaps violent without being grounded in mental disease, and genuine manic-depressive psychosis ,

(C) between mood swings, which may be violent without being grounded in mental disease, and genuine manic-depressive psychosis

(D) between mood swings, perhaps violent without being grounded in mental disease, from genuine manic-depressive psychosis

(E) genuine manic-depressive psychosis and mood swings, which may be violent without being grounded in mental disease

The best choice is C because it uses the idiomatically correct expression distinguishes between x and y and because it provides a structure in which the relative clause beginning which may be violent clearly modifies mood swings. The other choices use distinguishes in unidiomatic constructions. Additionally, their in A is intrusive and unnecessary, and the modifier of mood swings in B and D (perhaps violent) is awkward and less clear than the more developed clause which may be violent.

请教NN们,我咋就不觉得viloent unclear呢,modifier什么时候用releative clause,什么时候可以用 adj.啊


作者: himba    时间: 2004-12-9 07:17

choice B. simplify the sentence, we get:

Dr. F distinguishes mood swings, perhaps violent, and ...

You see, "perhaps violent" can modify Dr. F and mood swings.

That's why ETS uses 'less clear'.


作者: wretdgdh    时间: 2004-12-10 09:35

以下是引用himba在2004-12-9 7:17:00的发言:

choice B. simplify the sentence, we get:

Dr. F distinguishes mood swings, perhaps violent, and ...

You see, "perhaps violent" can modify Dr. F and mood swings.

That's why ETS uses 'less clear'.

恩,谢谢himba。我就没有能力简化句子[em04]




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