Unlike most other mergers in the utility industry, which have been driven by the need to save money and extend companies’ service areas, the merger of the nation’s leading gas and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening their utility markets to competition.
A. and electric company is intended to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening
B. and electric companies are intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open
C. and electric companies are intended to create a huge network that will be marketing the utilities in question, with states opening
D. company and electric company are intending to create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question, with states opening
E. company and leading electric company is intended to create a huge network for marketing the utilities in question as states open
ans:E
请教NN把A的错误分析一下吧,这个句子不是很明白
感觉A, the merger of company不对,至少也要 companies.
E, merger of gas company and electric company 感觉要好多了
感觉A, the merger of company不对,至少也要 companies.
E, merger of gas company and electric company 感觉要好多了
同意,而且create a huge marketing network for the utilities in question with states opening 有问题。
不是network for the utilities 而是network for marketing the utilities
不是with states opening 而是as states open
gas and electric company 是指两家公司呢还是兼营gas和electric的公司,有歧义,排除abc
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