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作者: lingdangyour    时间: 2008-6-15 09:38     标题: gwd 7-13

Q13:

Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.

A. the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in

B. the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in

C. that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to

D. in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in

E. in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing

答案B,不知道itself 和it 是否可以指代不同的东西,在这里it应该指代的是sandpiper 吧


作者: smallzhang    时间: 2008-6-16 06:42

thereby: adv. =thus. You use thereby to introduce an important result or

consequence of the event or action you have just mentioned.

eg. A firm might sometimes sell at a loss to drive a competitor out of

business, and thereby increase its market power.
 

thereby是副词,这里表示结果,不能作连词,要由连词and连接。

LZ的翻译没有把thereby的意思包括进去,所以看上去不合逻辑。

虽然in turn也有相同的意思as a result of sth in a series of events,但是

activation是名词,缺少连系动词,与前面的句子脱节了。

供仅参考。


作者: lingdangyour    时间: 2008-6-16 21:03

and前后连接的是两个完整的句子,and thereby activate 应该是省略了主语吧,而

按照逻辑意思来看,and thereby activate 的主语应该是and前面的那句话,这应该用

一个名词替代,而不能省略吧
作者: lingdangyour    时间: 2008-6-18 06:48

agree  up  !!!!!!!!





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