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作者: susenmayorer    时间: 2008-4-7 10:21     标题: og18

18. Each of Hemingway's wives--Hadley Richardson. Pauline Pfeiffer. Martha Gelhom. and Mary Welsh --were strong and interesting women, very different from the often pallid women who populate his novels.

(A) Each of Hemingway's wives--Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--were strong and interest­ing women,

(B) Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhorn, and Mary Welsh--each of them Hemingway's wives--were strong and, interesting women,

(C) Hemingway's wives--Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--were all strong and interesting women,

(D) Strong and interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--each a wife of Hemingway, was

(E) Strong and interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--every one of Hemingway's wives were

D中的—each a wife of Hemingway是什么成份?each a wife of Hemingway是什么结构?eacha wife中间是不是省略了was,或者a wifeeach的同位语?each是什么词性?was的主语为什么不是each或者a wife?是不是因为有个“,”如果把“,”去掉,像E一样,是不是was的主语就不是strong and interesting women了?


作者: aprilhuangs    时间: 2008-4-7 19:44

each a wife of Hemingway 应该改为each of H's wife, 是strong and interesting women的补充说明成分,was的主语应该是women,因为“—”后的为补语成分,其作用是举例说明

不能去掉逗号,否则为run-on sentence


作者: susenmayorer    时间: 2008-4-9 06:46

那这么说E也是run-on sentence?可是OG解释中并没有提到啊?

还有,到底什么叫run-on sentence?

谢谢啦!!


作者: aprilhuangs    时间: 2008-4-9 20:41

 When a sentence consists of more than one clause, those clauses must be joined properly. It is never acceptable to hook two clauses together with a comma, as the "sentence" below does. That's called a run on sentence.

连写句:(错用逗号等)使两个或多个独立从句不正确地连在一起的句子


按这个标准E不属于run-on,E的错误在于subject-verb agreement,主语every one和谓语were不一致


作者: susenmay    时间: 2008-4-11 07:06

我觉得D中因为was前面有逗号,所以—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer,

Martha Gelhom, and Mary Welsh--each a wife of Hemingway都是修饰Strong and

interesting women,women作主语;而E中因为were前面没有逗号,所以Strong and

interesting women—Hadley Richardson, Pauline Pfeiffer, Martha Gelhom, and

Mary Welsh--修饰every one of Hemingway's wives,every one作主语。我这样的理解

对吗?

而且,我觉得D如果把逗号去掉,就跟E一样了,没有run-on sentence

请指教






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