249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.
(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of
ETS解释说 In A, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians, 请问that引导的句子到底是修饰 aritists 还是 musicians。正确答案B,including elvis presley and jerry garcia,又是修饰谁?
我觉得A中的that前面的was also an inspiration to many musicians不是插入语,那么就不能用that.因为that只能引导限制性定语从句,that修饰的名词和that中间不能有逗号(插入语例外)
B中的including修饰的是musicians,可以从后面的whose music可以看出来。而且这个句子的谓语是inspire, including不可能跳过句子主干去修饰前面whose引导的定语从句中的artists,如果要修饰artists,就应该紧跟在artists后面。
OG裡對A的解釋
In A, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians
應該不是說 A不適當地只修飾了 musicians, 而是說 逗號加 that 的用法不好
這裡, including是非限定定語, 而不是 influenced 和inspired的伴隨狀語
這樣理解應該比較好
请问把B答案(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
改成限制性定语从句 (B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
行吗?超级蔡鸟语法手册上说限制与非限制是整体与局部的关系,??
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