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标题: 求助两个改错 [打印本页]

作者: teyvhf    时间: 2004-4-28 16:01     标题: 求助两个改错



有两道KAPLAN改错,不理解.请指教. NO.1 With adjustments for inflation, the relative cost of welfare benefits has been dropping since 1973, resulting in the welfare program now costing about 3 billion real dollars less to implement than it did. Correct: and as a result the welfare program now costs about 3 million real dollars less to implement than it did. NO.2 Although the author himself declared them unpublished, the first appearance in print if 40 poems by TS is significant event , since they provide fascinating evidence about the creative process that were engaged in by this great Modernist. Correct: since they provide fascinating evidence about the creative process in which this great Modernist engaged.
作者: himba    时间: 2004-4-28 16:02

1,A,relative cost resulting in....,logic meaning is absurd.


2, active voice priors to passive voice .
作者: vagrant    时间: 2004-4-28 18:31

agree with himba




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