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作者: LilyJune    时间: 2007-9-29 07:13     标题: 大全679

1. Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.

(A) the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom

(B) the higher profits that are made in the placement of highly paid professionals, requests for whom

(C) from the requests for highly paid professionals, who make higher profits for the agencies when placed and whose requests

(D) from highly paid professionals, whose placement makes higher profits for the agencies and whose requestsE

(E) from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom

C不对的原因是不是只有when placed,我觉得from the requests for与from the increasing demand for 正好平行,比E还要好


作者: LilyJune    时间: 2007-9-29 14:12

哦,不对啊,when placed在这的用法是对的,那C为什么不对呢?
作者: zhangxirui87    时间: 2007-9-29 19:46

试着解释一下:C改变了原文的意思,原文强调的是from the profit,而C改为from

the request.


作者: bastencools    时间: 2007-10-4 06:53

 C. 1. who 前面的逗号不应该有的, 后面的长句是修饰 professionals 的

2 逻辑意义不对, professionals 自己的 request 不能如何如何,

应该是 the request for professionas 如何如何, 是 request 变了
 


作者: LilyJune    时间: 2007-10-6 06:42

thanks a lot !!!!!!!![em05]




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