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标题: [讨论]☆有关建筑估价的论点和论据(2篇) [打印本页]

作者: excellent    时间: 2004-3-10 18:26     标题: [讨论]☆有关建筑估价的论点和论据(2篇)


[讨论]有关建筑估价的论点和论据
16、“public buildings reveal much about the attitudes and values of the society that builds them. today’s new schools, courthouses, airports, and libraries, for example, reflect the attitudes and values of today’s society.”
“公众建筑反映了建造它的社会的许多态度和价值。例如,今天的新学校,法院,机场,图书馆反应了今天的社会的态度和价值。”

78、“most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society’s past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes.”
“多数人会同意建筑是任何社会的过去的有价值的记录,但是当老建筑位于当代设计者认为用于现代目的会更好的地方时,争议就会冒出来。”

这两个题目被我在《[推荐]★GMAT作文常考题目总结★》 设为第三类:建筑估价(2篇),有的同志认为题目较难,那就让我们先来讨论讨论。

请大家以这样的格式来书写:
1、论点:
2、论据:

谢谢大家的参与!

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作者: excellent    时间: 2004-3-10 18:27

孙远《gmat写作》中的论点和论据如下:

16、
position: as an integrating element of a culture, public buildings reflect the values of a society.

a: on the one hand, public buildings vary in style from culture to culture, representing the different aesthetic values of respective cultures.

b: on the other hand, the different functions that public buildings serve in different societies directly reveal the different ideals and ways of life in those societies.

78、
position: the best alternative is to modernize the city while preserving as much as possible its symbols of the past.

a: first, historic capitals or cultural centers, which were carefully designed and meticulously constructed, should be preserved as wholesomely as possible, because they represent historic pinnacles of cultural and artistic sophistication.

b: second, rare old buildings of lasting historic value that represent some bygone era are worth preserving.

c: finally, with advanced building technologies, city planers can even move the sporadic old buildings and put them together in a specially designated location.

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作者: excellent    时间: 2004-3-10 18:27


我抛砖引玉

16.
论点:部分的建筑反映了社会的态度和价值,但也有部分建筑只是反映少数人的态度和价值。
论据:有的建筑,如学校、法院等建筑分别反映了社会对待教育、法制的态度,体现了社会进步。但有的建筑,只是作为某些领导者或是建筑师的独特意识和价值观的表现,并不能代表着社会的态度。

78.
论点:部分的老建筑反映了以往社会的态度和价值,有着特殊的保留意义,但大多数的老建筑没有高价值,可以拆除,使地方用于现代目的。
论据:在老建筑中,那些经历过特殊事件的或有着其他特殊意义的,尤其是独一无二的老建筑,应该被保留,并且要细心的维护,因为它们反映了以往社会的历史与文明。但大多数老建筑是没有太多历史意义的,它们总归要被新建筑、新价值所淘汰。这时,为了社会的进步,文明的发展,这些老建筑都可以被拆除。

写的不好,欢迎大家批评。

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