Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.
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[MSOffice1]位置虽然不见得好,但是也不见得不好
[MSOffice2]companies that compete one day may be partners the next , 明显更balance, 如果用competing companies会造成one day的修饰比较尴尬,
[MSOffice3]这个用法上明显是不如more established的,同等条件下adj.>clause, and “in the more established industries” is more parallel to “in the Internet industry”
more+adj+n,你说这个more 修饰谁呢,是adj 还是n?所以有歧义,比
如:more effecient small cars应该改为:small cars that are more
efficient.
谢谢楼上的回答,
这个我也看到讨论帖说过这个问题,难道说所有的用more的比较级都不能修饰可数名词?这个恐怕不能作为标准吧
但是再看B,competing这个词在句子中明显就破坏了句子的平衡,而且,one day修饰什么呢?
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