标题: GWD-6-2 [打印本页]
作者: orchidbrooks 时间: 2007-3-26 07:12 标题: GWD-6-2
According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
- According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
- By skimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.
- A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
- A proposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.
- According to its proponents, skimming along the top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.(A)
想请问E哪里错了,还有A的 by skimming along the top of the atmosphere这段插入句的位子妥当吗?
谢谢
作者: XIAOHANMEIME 时间: 2007-3-26 13:11
E把原来的状语变成主语,改变句子重心
作者: yuqinggong 时间: 2007-3-26 19:30
E项主语成了skimming along the top of the atmosphere ,那么前面
According to its proponents中it等于指代了skimming along the top of the atmosphere ,这样从逻辑上也说不通吧?
作者: rmagpie 时间: 2007-3-29 04:20
"make it possible + that sentence" is not concise.
One word " could" = make it possible;
E also changed the original meaning of the sentence.
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