标题: [讨论]★有关环境保护的论点和论据（2篇） [打印本页]
作者: excellent 时间: 2003-10-19 09:26 标题: [讨论]★有关环境保护的论点和论据（2篇）
有关环境保护的论点和论据
2、“it is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently, the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. international leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.”
“指望单个国家独立地做出必要的牺牲来保存能源是不现实的。如果我们希望为下一代保护世界的能源资源，国际领导力量和全球性的公司是基本的。”
13、“responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”
“保护自然环境的责任完全属于每个个人，而非政府。”
这两个题目被我在《★GMAT作文常考题目总结★》 设为第三类：建筑估价（2篇），有的同志认为题目较难，那就让我们先来讨论讨论。
请大家以这样的格式来书写：
1、论点：
2、论据：
谢谢大家的参与！
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孙远《gmat写作》中的论点和论据如下：
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Position: Emphasis on the overwhelming importance of international leadership and worldwide cooperation for the purpose of energy conversation does not necessarily contradict with encouraging individual nations to make voluntary and independent efforts to protect energy resources.
A: Left to their own devices, individual nations, like people, will act according to their own short-term motives and self-interest.
B: The problem of energy crisis as well as the solution to it is international in scope.
C: However, when individual nations become aware of the importance of the preservation of their domestic energy resources as well as the interdependence of nations in term of energy consumption and conservation, they are very likely to make consicous sacrifices for the good of their own national interests.
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Position: Although individuals' voluntary actions are necessary for environmental preservation, I insist that governmental participation plays a more important role in this campaign.
A: Individual or private companies tend to pursue their short-term private interests, which has been the direct cause of environmental crisis.
B: Government possesses the authority and resources necessary to address environmental problems.
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[此贴子已经被作者于2003-10-19 9:34:08编辑过]
作者: excellent 时间: 2003-10-19 09:34
我个人拙见
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论点：指望单个国家独立地做出必要的牺牲来保存能源资源很不现实，国际力量不可缺少。
论据：世界上各个国家的能源资源占用储备竞争非常激烈，这最终决定着单个国家综合实力在世界上的排名。牺牲自己国家的利益来保护能源资源将不利于竞争，因此要单个国家做出牺牲保护资源是不太可能的。另外，保护世界能源资源象对待其他世界问题一样必须靠全部国家的共同努力，国际领导力量和全球公司的努力是不可或缺的。
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论点：保护自然环境的责任既属于个人，也属于政府。
论据：每个个人都有保护自然资源的责任。我们要努力保护我们的生存环境，为了后代的健康，也为了社会的可持续发展，每个个人保护环境的力量都是不可忽视的。但是，保护自然资源需要有组织地、有计划地进行，个人对环境的保护非常有限，这就需要政府进行合理的安排和调度，使得环境保护工作更加的有效。
写的不好，欢迎大家批评。
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[此贴子已经被作者于2003-10-19 9:25:07编辑过]
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