常见错误
1. 语义重复
Ø although --- however (PREP2-80)
Ø although --- yet (OG12-100)
Ø attempt --- try (OG12-24)
Ø attributed --- the cause of (OG12-79)
Ø but --- yet
Ø but --- even though (OG12-98)
Ø currently --- now (OG12-70)
Ø due to --- with the result (OG12-33)
Ø enable --- be able to (OG12-55)
Ø explained --- because of (OG12-83)
Ø in the past --- previously (OG12-7)
Ø other than what it is --- precisely the opposite (OG12-106)
Ø provision --- provide (OG12-113)
Ø reduced --- lowered (OG12-134)
Ø regain --- again (OG12-137)
2. 所有格错误
Ø 动词ing形式放在名词所有格后通常有歧义
organism’s trying => organism’s attempt (OG12-24)
Ø 没有生命的名词所有格形式
the festival’s month => the month of festival(OG12-59/ OG12-74/ OG12-121)
Ø 有生命的名词所有格形式
the career of Muller => Muller’s career(OG12-135)
3. 强调整体改成强调局部
Ø that 引导的同位语,一般不能用定语替换
hopes that (OG12-2); expectations that (OG12-16) 注意后面时态必须是将来时will/would; confidence that(OG12-50); evidence that (OG12-68); hypothesis that(OG12-115); a phenomenon that(OG12-118); report that(OG12-121)
Ø because +句子,一般不能用because of 替换(OG12-33/ OG12-76)
Ø 宾语从句,一般不能用宾语短语替换
the theory holds that the universe began 不能替换为the theory holds the universe to have begun (OG12-8)
Ø 主谓结构,一般不能用名词+定语从句替换
educators are at fault for doing不能替换为the fault of educators who have done(OG12-57)
4. 修饰语使用不当
Ø 混淆-ing短语与to do
区别:to do 表目的,ing有解释说明之意 (133)
Ø 混淆-ing短语与that+过去时
"that+过去时"有一种强调该动作已经过去,现在已经结束的意思(completed action),而"-ing"则表示该动作仍然持续者(ongoing action)(也因此适用于一般规律)。
an ancient civilization that flourished at the same time as..过去,现在不再flourish了(OG12-85)
a concert performance that the composer himself staged in 1911...过去,不能用staging修饰(ALL-288)
a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the west...一般描述,现在并没有结束(ALL-168)
Visitors have often seen monkeys sleeping on the branches...没有结束,和前面的现在时态一致(ALL-915)
Ø 混淆定语从句与ing分词短语
错误形式有将定语从句改成ing分词短语作为主句谓语的伴随状语。(OG12-66/ OG12-105/ OG12-126)
the killer whale, which can grow ...不能改成the killer whale, growing ...(OG12-66)
Ø 混淆形容词与副词
副词形容词修饰对象的不同:corresponding increased sales (correspondingly increased sales错) (OG12-12)
Ø 时间状语修饰对象有歧义
时间状语放在两个句子(主句与从句)中间(OG12-3)
5. 不简洁
Ø It may be that… (wordy) 改成 Maybe … (OG12-4)
Ø with by accounts of (wordy)改成using accounts of (OG12-25)
Ø whether or not (wordy) 改成 whether(OG12-34)
Ø it has the ability to../ the ability for it to (wordy) (OG12-34/ OG12-107)
Ø being的wordy:ed分词短语修饰对象时 (OG12-49/ OG12-103)
Ø it 引导的that 从句的wordy:
it is the fault of educators who (wordy) 改成 educators are at fault (OG12-57)
it is the expectation that/ it is expected that 改成 heating oil prices are expected to (OG12-93)
Ø 被动语态的wordy:farmer are to be allowed to/ grain able to be grown by/ grain capable of being grown by(wordy)
Ø 定语从句的wordy:改成形容词或同位语从句 (OG12-80/ OG12-88/ OG12-102)
Ø there be 句型 的wordy (OG12-102/ OG12-113)
Ø two times (wordy) 改成twice(OG12-125)
Ø 动词优先于名词:it is used in reference to…(wordy)改成 it refers to …(OG12-8/ OG12-11/ OG12-31/ OG12-106/ OG12-132)
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