请替我看看这道作文题

margland

Stronger laws are needed to protect new kinds of home-security systems from being copied and sold by imitators. With such pritection, manufacturers will naturally invest in the development of new home –security products and production technologies. Without stronger laws, therefore, manufacturers will cut back on investment. From this follow a corresponding decline not only in product quality and maketablity, but also in production efficiency, and thus ultimately a loss of manufacturing jobs in the industry.又来一道题不会哦[em06]

nan

from sunyuan's green book 41
1) in the first place, the arguer is begging the qestion in assuming that exsiting copyright, patent and trade secret laws are inadequate to protect home-security,system design.
2) in the second place, the arguer unfairly assumes that stronger legal protection will surely encourage manufacturers to invest in home-security system development.
3) finally, the arguer fails to establish a causal relationship between imposing stronger laws and product quality, marketability, production efficiency and manufacturung jobs.