几种常见的错误PS开头类型

　一、美国留学PS开头--重复简历型
　　I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
　　点评：美国留学ps不要去重复简历中的东西，这在很多学校的PS要求中明确提到，个人陈述的写作要具体到事件上，事件解决上，而不要单纯重复已有的内容。
　　二、美国留学PS开头--学校介绍型
　　I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.
　　点评：该同学的ps开头等于是一个申请学校的简介，这好像是在帮助学校做宣传，或表达你有多了解该学校，而不是写个人陈述了。这是没有意义的开头，白白浪费了字数，最容易被秒据掉。
　　三、美国留学PS开头--抄袭句式型
　　As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.
　　点评：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这种句式不知道是从哪里学到的，很多同学在用。但你要知道，老外最恨抄袭，最喜原创，所以利害关系大家想想吧。
　　四、美国留学PS开头--救世主型
　　I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …
　　点评：一副救世主的形象，小时候就受富兰克林的影响，立志改变世界。ps的写作一定要个人化具体化，别吹大牛，甚至带着一种霸权主义思维。