求教一道题 og12-59

chaos1026

59. The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month.

(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed during the festival's month
(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the festival's month
(C) world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for the festival month
(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during the month of the festival
(E) world by proclamation of a sacred truce that was for the month of the festival

千行excel里面判定bce 错的原因是proclaim的主语只能是人 但是我查了金山 有些例句中proclaim的主语并不一定是人
eg：The ringing bells proclaimed the birth of the prince.
现在先不考虑所有格的错误，就针对proclaim的发出者讨论
The constitution proclaims that public property shall be inviolate.The constitution proclaims that public property shall be inviolate.

我的观点是：
句意：奥林匹克竞赛帮助维护希腊某些states的和平，因为在这一个节日的月份中 states宣布宗教式的停战。（而不是奥运会宣布宗教式的停战 ）
所以b中proclaiming的主语是games不正确（不是说games不是人 所以不能做proclaim的主语，而是句意不是games做主语）
c中 they按照主语的位置应该指代olympic games 但是实际上they指代states 所以也不对 ；且when没有因果逻辑
d中直接用被动 则省去了proclaim的发出者不明的歧义；
e中 proclaim的主语还是games 还是不对；


以上是我的理解，有什么不对的希望大家能够指出来，谢谢大家了

chaos1026

自己顶下啊 大家都来说说做这道题的时候是怎么拍出错的选出正确答案的？？？

lohashilda

LZ这么理解也可以。

captainer

这题其实我也不赞同国外说的proclaim主语是人这一解释

C如果从代词指代来排除的话感觉还是有点危险

chaos1026

感谢！！
所以c从when没有因果逻辑和for改变句意这个方向判断没错吧?--

captainer

我觉得更明显的是for的用法上

注意到A选项的意思么

during是说这个truce在这一期间被建立起来了

C选项的for让人感觉就是truce建立的目的和这个月份有关

不知道你懂不懂我的意思？~

chaos1026

嗯嗯 明白了 意思变了！一个是时间概念 另外一个好像可以理解成目的 为了。。我再问你一道题好么？

chaos1026

1.A letter by Mark Twain, written in the same year as The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn were published, reveals that Twain provided financial assistance to one of the first Black students at Yale Law School.
　　A. A letter by Mark Twain, written in the same year as The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn were published,
　　B. A letter by Mark Twain, written in the same year of publication as The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn,
　　C. A letter by Mark Twain, written in the same year that The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn was published,
　　D. Mark Twain wrote a letter in the same year as he published The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn that
　　E. Mark Twain wrote a letter in the same year of publication as The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn

这里的the same year as 是不是只是表示两件事情是发生在同一年的，不是the same as（和。。一样）的用法？
a选项用 the same as 结构的话前后应该平行，但是as后面是个句子，而且从句中主谓不一致；
而c选项中that是个同位语从句修饰the year，same只是一个简单的adj修饰year，不存在the same as结构
这么理解对么？？
还有，如果非要用the same as结构 这个题该怎么改呢？

2.85. Salt deposits and moisture threaten to destroy the Mohenjo-Daro excavation in Pakistan, the site of an ancient civilization that flourished at the same time as the civilizations in the Nile Delta and the river valleys of the Tigris and Euphrates.

(A) that flourished at the same time as the civilizations
(B) that had flourished at the same time as had the civilizations
(C) that flourished at the same time those had
(D) flourishing at the same time as those did
(E) flourishing at the same time as those were
这个是og-85题
og并没有提到the same as使用平行的说法，而只是说两个文明是同时存在的
正确选项的as后面加的是名词。而别的选项as+n+verb，og的解释是verb是多余的。那么这里并不是相同动词的省略，而是只用加名词即可？


两个题比较 第一个题的as后面加句子 第二个as 后面加名词，the same as 到底该怎么用？