【求助】GWD30-Q1:

wojiaodubing

1. GWD30-Q1:
The artistRenoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken as they arranged a bouquet of rosesjust picked from his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.

A.   as they arranged a bouquet of roses justpicked from his garden
B.   as a bouquet of roses had been just pickedfrom his garden and was being arranged
C.   as a bouquet of roses just picked from hisgarden was being arranged
D.   during the arrangement of a bouquet of rosesjust picked from his garden
E.    while they arranged a bouquet of roses thathad just been picked from his garden
答案是C.  

为什么D不对啊？C中being很别扭

vinceshieh

Renoir死的时候说的最后一句话与插花这个动作是同时发生的，应该用过去进行时。
而且arrange有动词形式的选项的时候优先用动词吧~~
再说，虽然不是平行结构，但是spoken有被动的意思
“word”被“spoken”与“花儿”“被插”比较对称吧~~

嗯，欢迎讨论哈~~

gui5910667

1. GWD30-Q1:
The artistRenoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken as they arranged a bouquet of ro ...
wojiaodubing 发表于 2012-10-16 06:56

呵呵，你把D彻底弄成一个句子，读一下：　The artist Renoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken during the arrangement of a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.
his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill??
这个花园怎么在瓶子里呢？

wojiaodubing

哦，有道理，谢谢大家！

honeybee316

在别的地方看到的：
"as" indicates that things are going on simultaneously, so switching to "had just been" is wrong

coffeeqoo

B 选项为什么不对能解释一下吗？

lshlccER

我选B了，但是完全是因为想多了，我当时的第一反应是采花应该在spoken前，所以我觉得应该用had been just picked , 而插花是在spoken的同时，所以要用 was being arranged。
anyway, 没有那么复杂啦，这里的spoken是分词形式修饰'flowers', picked直接修饰花就好了，因为这里不强调采花这个动作是在前还是怎样，但是这里强调了插花这个动作是同时，spokenasa bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged.
p.s open to discuss