以下是引用falcons在2005-8-7 20:18:00的发言：
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第7行 While this program enabled many minority entrepreneurs to form new businesses, the results were disappointing中form new businesses指开办公司 还是指发展新业务？
form new businesses 应该和第一句的business对应。
Federal efforts to aid minority businesses began in the
1960’s when the Small Business Administration (SBA)
began making federally guaranteed loans and govern-
ment-sponsored management and technical assistance
(5) available to minority business enterprises. While this
program enabled many minority entrepreneurs to
form new businesses, the results were disappointing,
since managerial inexperience, unfavorable locations,
and capital shortages led to high failure rates. Even 15
(10) years after the program was implemented, minority
business receipts were not quite two percent of the national
economy’s total receipts.
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Recently federal policymakers have adopted an approach intended to accelerate development of the minority business sector by moving away from directly aiding small minority enterprises and toward supporting larger, growth-oriented minority firms through intermediary companies
中 and toward supporting中怎么觉得加了and读得不怎么顺畅？
by moving away from directly aiding small minority enterprises 和toward supporting larger, growth-oriented minority firms through intermediary companies 是平行结构， by 。。。。是一个方面，toward。。。是另一个方面
