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204.
(T-9-Q16)



The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.

A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a

B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a

C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well

D. critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of

E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

答案是A，没有人讨论过，NN给讲解一下吧。

bradfordchen

critique和vision做同位语修饰results of his early experiments

since Robert Boyle与主句的完成时相对应，纯属本人愚见

FGHYU19912301

LS说的critique和vision做同位语修饰results of his early experiments 是有道理的；
但是since不是这个意思，何况主句并没有使用完成时~
考点：平行对称
a critique of ....as well as a vision of ....

billsq

204.

(T-9-Q16)

The nineteenth-century chemist HD presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that to found.

The nineteenth-century chemist Humphry Davy presented the results of his early experiments in his “Essay on Heat and Light,” a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a new chemistry that Davy hoped to found.这里的found不是find过去时而是found建立
成立

A. a critique of all chemistry since Robert Boyle as well as a vision of a同位语优选
这里的a critique as well as a vision说的都是
            “Essay on Heat and Light”这本书

B. a critique of all chemistry following Robert Boyle and also his envisioning of a这里不能用following因为following是现在分词不是介词 and also改变句子重心
在envisioning有明确名词vision的情况下不要用现在分词做名词

C. a critique of all chemistry after Robert Boyle and envisioning as well and改变句子重心 evisioning现在分词做名词要用vision 这里and…as well是个错误的混用
况且a critique and envisoning一名词一现在分词伴随状语不妥

D. critiquing all chemistry from Robert Boyle forward and also a vision of这里from…forward不如就直接用since and also改变句子重心 critiquing and a vision一现在分词伴随状语一名词不妥

E. critiquing all the chemistry done since Robert Boyle as well as his own envisioning of

这里done没有必要加 envisioning现在分词做名词不如本来名词vision好 his own改变句意
            

Critique做名词[uncountable and countable]

a detailed explanation of the problems of something such as a set of political ideas

ￚsee also evaluation

critique of

a major new critique of his work a critique of modern economic theory

Critique做动词[transitive] formal

to say how good or bad a book, play, painting, or set of ideas is

ￚsee also evaluate He offered to critique our plans.

Vision of做名词3

[countable]an idea of what you think something should be like

vision of

He had a clear vision of how he hoped the company would develop.

Envision做动词to imagine something that you think might happen in the future, especially something that you think will be good

ￚsynonym envisageAs a young teacher, I envisioned a future of educational excellence.

这里能不能改成critiquing…and envisioning…呢
我想应该是不能的
毕竟这两个动词的动作发出者都是人
现在分词做伴随状语逻辑主语是HD这个人
那么就完全不是在说书怎样怎样了
但是下面的这个题不一样

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The features of the floor of the Kasei Valles on Mars look just like those at the base of Antarctic ice streams, so it suggests that possibly it was flowing ice that carved the giant Martian channels previously attributed to cataclysmic floods.

(A) so it suggests that possibly it was flowing ice that it指代了全句错

(B) a suggestion that flowing ice may have

(C) to suggest flowing ice as possibly having句末逗号+to do错(在被中间插入成分分开而导致的情况下是对的)

(D) suggesting that flowing ice may have应该就是伴随状语
逻辑主语是the features

(E) which is suggestive of flowing ice having possiblywhich指代不清 be suggestive不如动词有效

Prep320上正解:

A.
it没有指代对象

B.
a suggestion不能概括前句话的含义

C.
不定式使用错误

D.
正确。

E.
Which没有指代对象；形容词be suggestive不及动词有效。

句子结构：The features of … look just like those (指代features) at…, suggesting….

前半句描述一个发现或者事实，后半句可以使用伴随状语、同位语等用法，说明该发现或事实的影响、意义。此句使用的为伴随状语，如果要使用同位语，则为，The features of … look just like those (指代features) at…, a finding/phenomenon/fact that suggests….

汗...原来suggestion不能概括啊
可我为什么觉得能概括啊
前面那句说的内容正好是个暗示啊 55555555

既然答案是D 那就使劲把自己的思维往正确答案上靠好了


查了一下Longman 汗...黄色高亮是suggestion的三个用法
第一个是建议
就是suggetion that should那种
在这个题里肯定不可以
第三种是a suggestion of在这个题里也不对
就剩下暗示的意思了
请看第二个黄色高亮部分[singular, uncountable] a sign or possibility of something
在这个情况下是 sigular, 还是uncountable那么B就必然错了...从另一个侧面也可以分析出 suggestion做建议是可数 a suggestion必然是一个建议
不可能是暗示了
注意一下countable还是uncountable好了
所以也只能选择D了

1
[countable] an idea, plan, or possibility that someone mentions, or the act of mentioning it
Any helpful suggestions would be welcome.
suggestion that
the suggestion that houses should be built on this site
May I make a suggestion ? Let me know if you have any suggestions . The committee is open to suggestions (=willing to listen to ideas) .
at somebody's suggestion
She took a seat at his suggestion.
2
[singular, uncountable] a sign or possibility of something
suggestion of
There was never any suggestion of criminal involvement. The government have denied any suggestion of involvement in her death.
suggestion that
There's some suggestion that the intruder was the same person that killed Angie.
3
a suggestion of something
a slight amount of something
There was just a suggestion of a smile on her face.

看来同位语还是要认真体会的

applemay

这里能不能改成critiquing…and envisioning…呢
我想应该是不能的
毕竟这两个动词的动作发出者都是人
现在分词做伴随状语逻辑主语是HD这个人
那么就完全不是在说书怎样怎样了
但是下面的这个题不一样


楼上先设定了修饰语是修饰书的，然后得出了因为现在分词做伴随状语的主语是“Humphry Davy",所以不妥的结论。可是没人规定最后那个修饰语就只能修饰书。所以如果改成critiquing…and envisioning是完全可以的。表达方式合理且整句的基本意思并没有被改动。

a514116402c

这里能不能改成critiquing…and envisioning…呢
我想应该是不能的
毕竟这两个动词的动作发出者都是人
现 ...
applemay 发表于 2011-10-12 21:36

同意这种解释。
我觉得这个题用同位语或者伴随状语都可以。


有没有大牛再出来解释一下