求助 OG12 131

supercury

Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent

我自己选择了D OG官方解释D不对很牵强阿，我不觉得the有如此强烈的指代到前面energy in France的意味啊
我倒反而觉得主句的比较主体是percentage D开篇就是percentage很呼应，优过C啊

哪位nn能给一个更令偶信服的解释呢 谢谢

imbalancey

你看能不能这样理解，D中的just...of the energy对前面的分句呼应，与前句结构非常类似，容易给人造成这个energy还是再指法国的情况，而且in Germany是在句子的最后，更容易给读者造成这样的误解。
C选项中一开始使用nuclear power，让读者感觉作者说话突然换了个方式，很容易明白后一个句子和前句存在明显不同，另外我感觉GMAT很喜欢用account for来造句子啊！
如：75％的能源的产生在法国来源于核动力，如果按我们中国人说话的习惯，你会说“D选项－－然而33%的能源的产生来源于核动力在德国”，还是“C选项－－然而核动力产生33％的能源在德国”呢？你体会一下。

sherryke

同问D：“the energy produced in France ”comes from nuclear power in Germany

没能理解到the的特指这个意思...

wadsoda

D中the energy--> the energy produced in France
D可改为： whereas just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany comes from nuclear power -->BETTER
D原句中 in Germany 的位置不太对

jaffa23

同意LS    状语位置改变  句意容易变