OG中关于wordy，redundant的解释到底什么意思啊

xianmengyao

难道是要自己用语感来判断还是用什么现成的公式化的方法？？

suners

回复 1# xianmengyao


    得通过总结大量的题来感受OG的定义和判断标准，对比那些concise和effective的答案。下面有个例子。OG说A是wordy的。E是简洁有效的。

In 1850, Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for for changes in the married women's property laws.

A. arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights.
E. a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women.

teddyabc

在不改变愿意的情况下，用最少的单词，最简单的时态，最简单的结构表述。
比如：Disturbed by noise outside, I.... 就比 Being disturbed by 或者 Having been being disturbed by 简单，这就是wordy

至于redundant，比较好判断，就是在原句中出现了重复意思的词，而删除其中一些，并不引发歧义或者意思的缺失

momohe

语言中有很多惯用法，没有现成的简单公式来做判断。所以需要积累。