求助OG12-129题 OG解释D的错误不是很理解!
Cajuns speak a dialect brought to southern Louisiana by the 4,000 Acadians who migrated there in 1755; their language is basically seventeenth-century French to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words.
(A) to which has been added English, Spanish, and Italian words
(B) added to which is English, Spanish, and Italian words
(C) to which English, Spanish, and Italian words have been added
(D) with English, Spanish, and Italian words having been added to it
(E) and, in addition, English, Spanish, and Italian words are added
正确答案是C,
但是D中OG 解释说 With does not concisely modify the noun French; having been added to it is a wordy expression.也就是说with修饰French不够简洁,having been added to it 又多余。可是我不理解,它怎么就不简洁了呢?怎样变才能变简洁?后面的having been added to it 怎样变才显得不多余呢? |