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最后一次更新: 我刚才快要疯掉了,写了一个多小时的更新结果没有保存全没了,现在又只有重新来了。现在有点力不从心了。已经很晚了,我暂时把我认为可以的几篇文章发上来,大家可以看看。还是那句话,看思想! TOPIC:it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money I disagree with the statement that it is more important to work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money. ** a lot of money means having more opportunities. Therefore it is more beneficial to me than simply taking a job that I enjoy. At this current situation where we are suffering from this global economic downturn, what concerns me the most is whether or not I can live through this hard time, whether or not I will be able to support my family. Therefore I definitely want a job that I can make more money because it meets my most urgent requirement. Enjoyment would be negligible when compared with livelihood. ** a lot of money will also lead to more happiness than the joy you get from taking a job you like. For example, if I am a millionaire, not only can I provide my families a decent living, but also I can have excess money so that I can donate to the poorer people. I think the overall happiness of the poor getting aid would overmount the happy feeling I myself get. In this sense, taking a job that I enjoy rather than a job with a decent pay would be a little more selfish. Finally, having high payment job doesn’t necessarily mean that I will lose the chance to do the job that I enjoy. I can certainly consider doing the job that I enjoy after I save a certain amount of money. This strong economic foundation will reduce a lot of my concerns, therefore I can do the job that I like more freely and I will end up enjoying the job more. Besides this benefit, a strong economic ability also makes it possible for me to enjoy a lot more things. Then, maybe the job that I once considered interesting will not be that fun anymore. While some people may argue that this stance is too realistic or materialistic, I want to remind everyone that we, as human beings, have more obligations that we need to fulfill. A high payment job will make these a lot easier to meet. What’s more, it also will offer us opportunities. So payment will be my number one concern when i choose a job. TOPIC:Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society.Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Although internet came into being about 2 decades ago, it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200 years. Its influence on business, communication and information is so profound that people now simply can’t live without it. Based on the development of internet, a lot of new types of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established. The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google. Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service. This changed the traditional way of doing business which always involved some concrete products sell to people. Internet opens a cyber world in which a huge market is untapped. Besides large companies, internet also prospers small businesses. For example, local stores can do their business online. All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want. Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered. This way, we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping. Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate. There are a lot of chatting programs, such as MSN, YAHOO MESSENGER, SKYPE, that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as everyone has access to internet. They even provide audio and video services meaning not only people can chat, but also they can hear and see each other. Besides that, what really makes them appealing is that they don’t charge us for doing these things. These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us. Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information. A search has shown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total. I certainly wouldn’t doubt that. I use internet to search for a lot of information. Whenever I have an project to finish, the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials. There is no doubt that internet has had a fundamental change on our everyday life. Though there are many problems that accompany with it, we can’t deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history. TOPIC:You are planning to study abroad.What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience?Why? Studying abroad is becoming more and more popular among college students. It not only provides us opportunity to learn sophisticated technology and knowledge but also gives us chances to experience different cultures and life. However the fact that it will get me away from my family and friends for a long time is a bother to me. One of the major reasons that I want to study abroad is to acquire state of the art technology in a particular field. Now I am majoring electrical engineering, and I want to get further education in this field as a post graduate. However electrical engineering is not as well developed in my own nation as it is in the US. So in order to be an expert in this field and to follow my personal interest, studying abroad is a very good option. This way I can always have access to valuable knowledge as well as keep myself in the frontier in electrical engineering. Besides getting technical knowledge, studying abroad is also a chance for me to learn about different culture. It’s quite obvious that life in another country would be totally different from that of my own. First of all, I have to speak their language so that I can interact with other people. Secondly, I have to adjust myself to their way of thinking, and way of dealing with people, in other words, social skills. Finally I would also acquaint myself with a variety of new things that simply don’t exist in my home country. For example, American football is not that popular in China, but if I study in America and I want to have topic with other students, I think what I will have to do is to force myself to watch it, least of all, get to know it a little bit. These experiences would be very valuable since you can not get them anywhere else but this particular country. While I experience new culture I would certainly miss things and people traditional in my own country. Studying abroad is a long-term investment. I might be away from home for a year or maybe even two years, which means that I will not be able to see my families and friends for that long time. Without doubt, I will miss them a lot, and sometimes this miss might be so intense that I simply can’t deal with it. What’s more I will miss the traditional foods so much as well. I never expect that I can find the similar flavor of those foods in another country. So that poses me another problem of studying abroad. Despite all these disadvantages, I still prefer to study abroad. Because after all, my ultimate goal is to learn sophisticated knowledge and technology, which could better prepares me for my future challenges. 三篇应该差不多了吧,大家好好看看吧。 最后我来说说综合写作: 这个其实面很广,不好说。比如说有的是READING中三个论点非常明显,然后LECTURE 中再来三个论点,要么SUPPORT 要么OPPOSE。这类的综合写作相对来说是比较好写的,比BARRON,DELTA 上的综合写作都要好写。大家可以用高分120写作,上面基本上是这一类的。我只有一次IBT考试经验,我考的时候就是这一类的,但是至于是不是所有的考试都是这一类的,我就不好说了。 所以大家还是最好把每一类的都写写,重点可以放在我刚才讲的那一类上。 下面附上一篇我考试前一天晚上写的这一类的文章(高分120上的关于马可波罗的) In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses reasons that seem to show that Marco Polo never made it to China, while in the lecture, the professor argues that she thinks Marco Polo did go to China and gives her reasons. The first point made in the reading passage is that the fact that Marco Polo never picked up any Chinese and his reference to Chinese locations are borrowed from Persian language demonstrates that he did not arrive at China. However in the listening passage, while the professor confirms the fact, she argues that the borrowing of names from Persian is reasonable because the Persian region is what connects Asia and Europe in the past. The second point made in the reading passage is that Marco Polo never mentioned tea and teahouse in China in his books. Therefore it’s not likely that he did come to China. But the professor says at that time in China, tea and teahouse were only popular in Southern China. Since Marco Polo spent most of his time in Northern China, it is not a surprise that he did not mention tea and teahouse in his book. The third point made in the reading passage is that there is no records in China as to whether or not Marco Polo served at the court of the Mongol ruler. The professor explains that it might be because he was referred to by a different name because at that time in China, some court record didn’t use real names,or the record about him was lost. 最后再给大家一点建议: 综合不要写得太长,题目上说要225字,我觉得超出一点没有关系,但是保持在260字以内最好,曾经有一个哥们写了400多字结果只有一个FAIR,我觉得原因是他把READING 中的话大段大段的抄在了自己作文上。这点大家一定要慎重! READING 可以抄,一两句话即可,抄上中心思想,重点意思就OK 了。当然自己归纳也是可行的。 终于写玩了,我也要安心准备GRE了。祝大家也祝我自己好运。BYE! |
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